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Her First Kiss by M.J. Fields
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did not like it

This is not a new rookie author's first book, but it reads like one. Editing issues, lack of character progression, juvenile writing style. It was painful. I pushed through only to realize it ends in a crappily contrived cliff-hanger. Not only did the Amazon description not clearly say it was only part of their series, but then I also realized I paid $4.29 to suffer through just part of a bad story. I don't understand the five star reviews. If it weren't for the lack of ending I would have left 3 star despite my strong dislike and a 2 star read, but when the author can't be considerate enough to clearly indicate the cliff hanger it quickly became a one star.
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December 14, 2017 – Shelved
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