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Breath of Fire by Amanda Bouchet
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Aug 20, 2017

did not like it
bookshelves: dnf, library-checkout, recommended-by-a-friend
Read from August 16 to 20, 2017

This story is too complex for first person present tense.
Between the endless sex scenes--which feel contrived very quickly--and the bickering and all the Gods intervening it just got really tiresome. She has a strong premise and an interesting world. But First Person Present Tens limits her ability to tell an interesting story.
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