Avid's Reviews > Forever Young and Beautiful

Readers will want to read the first in this series to understand the characters and parameters of this supernatural world in this second installment in the series. Characters deal with difficult and real life situations just with a supernatural twist. Aussie lingo aside, there were still clear grammatical and punctuation errors that were distracting and occasionally made sentences difficult to read.

Great action but Characters needed more depth for declarations of love to be credible. Perhaps reading the books in order would solve that issue but I am not intrigued enough by the plot to go back and read book 1.