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Void Star by Zachary Mason
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did not like it

The page, one in number, contained, so many commas, the reader found it utterly, and, to say more, forever, to be, frankly, unreadable.

(Third sentence. 14 commas. Astounding.)
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May 20, 2017 – Shelved
May 20, 2017 – Shelved as: abandoned
May 21, 2017 – Started Reading
May 22, 2017 – Finished Reading

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Charles The writing-style of the author was appalling.


Marcia Chocinsky Only on p 81, and I’m not really a SF buff, but the writing is making it difficult to read. I agree with the above. See p34. Paragraph (1) starting with Irina. The last sentence is about 85% of the paragraph and contains 12 commas and runs on and on. Amazing, but not in a good way.


Charles Marcia wrote: "Only on p 81, and I’m not really a SF buff, but the writing is making it difficult to read. I agree with the above. See p34. Paragraph (1) starting with Irina. The last sentence is about 85% of the..."

Wot I thought.


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