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Echoes of Avalon by Adam Copeland
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This was a tough book to finish, but after taking a break midway through, I was able to get it done. It could've used a developmental edit to whittle out 150-200 pages. Why is that? Well, as someone complained in the comments, nothing happens for the longest time. This isn't epic fantasy. There's no great quest. It's clearly not Arthurian legend. It took forever to even learn who the villain was. This is a character driven story, and that's generally incapable of supporting a 500+ page novel.

At first, I thought this was going to be a story about a knight with PTSD, suffering from what he witnessed during the Crusades, but then the hooded apparition and Gawain's dwelling on the war disappeared from the story. It was replaced by day-to-day life on Avalon, which turned out to be rather mundane given the mysterious opening regarding how one gained access to the island. It all seemed like so much soap opera: Which knight is courting which lady? Will Gawain ever realize the affections of a certain handmaiden?

The villain arrived late and was more annoying than threatening. His relationship with his minion, Minion, was like watching a Saturday morning cartoon in the 70s. I won't say his name as that would certainly spoil it for future readers, but it's a name that carries a lot of literary baggage. The villain's origin story in the middle of the novel was wholly unnecessary as it didn't change my opinion of him nor enlighten me to his motivations. A shorter version could've worked as a prologue in a shorter novel, but randomly dumped in the middle of the book was too much, too late.

I would give this 2.5 stars if that were possible. I rounded up to three as Copeland shows that he firmly grasps characterization (I stuck with the story because I care about Gawain). He's also capable of fine world-building and garnishing it with the proper descriptive prose to render the scene, even negative ones—the opening scene on the boat stirred up a recent seasickness memory. He just needs the right editor to tighten the narrative and make it less tedious.
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Reading Progress

March 8, 2017 – Started Reading
March 8, 2017 – Shelved
March 10, 2017 –
5.0% "Two points so far:
1) The opening scene on the boat stirred up my most recent memory of seasickness with alarming ease.
2) Does Gawain have PTSD from the Crusades?"
March 11, 2017 –
10.0%
March 12, 2017 –
15.0%
March 13, 2017 –
20.0%
March 15, 2017 –
25.0%
March 16, 2017 –
30.0%
March 17, 2017 –
35.0%
March 18, 2017 –
40.0%
March 19, 2017 –
45.0%
March 20, 2017 –
50.0%
April 6, 2017 –
55.0%
May 23, 2017 –
60.0%
May 24, 2017 –
65.0%
June 5, 2017 –
70.0%
June 7, 2017 –
75.0%
June 8, 2017 –
80.0%
June 9, 2017 –
85.0%
June 10, 2017 –
90.0%
June 12, 2017 –
95.0%
June 13, 2017 – Shelved as: fantasy
June 13, 2017 – Finished Reading

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