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Wanting by Piper Vaughn
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Jul 28, 2011

really liked it

If you're looking for a sweet story of a young man having a dream fulfilled of his first time happening with his main crush, this is for you. Lovely 'visuals' of the scenery where the story takes place, I felt the sun shining, the cool breeze and the cold water of the lake. Surprisingly well-developed characters in a short story. Looking forward to more from this author.
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message 1: by Pickles (new)

Pickles Thanks, Fangtasia!


Fangtasia You're welcome,Harper. There were some lines that were downright lyrical. For example: "like dye moving over fabric, slow and drenching". I think it's one of the most original descriptions of how desire and arousal feels as it spreads I've ever seen. Great job! Can't wait to read more of your stuff.


message 3: by Pickles (new)

Pickles Oh, glad you liked that. It was one of my favorite lines in the story. :)


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