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The Monsters of Templeton
by Lauren Groff (Goodreads Author)
by Lauren Groff (Goodreads Author)
I finally abandoned this with only sixty pages to go. Abandoned it without learning the answer to the central question the book asks – who was my father? Because I realised I just couldn’t care. And because I was unable to distinguish most of the many characters from each other despite spending 400 pages with them so it didn’t matter who the father was.
Family trees are fascinating. I love that programme Who do you think you are? We’d all like to know much more about our ancestors. To discover the long succession of complex twists of fate that enabled us to finally get born. To find out who her father is Willie Upton, the narrator, will trace her family history back to the founding fathers of the town she was born in.
The novel begins with a great sentence – “The day I returned to Templeton steeped in disgrace, the 50 foot corpse of a monster surfaced in Lake Glimmerglass.” However, the only really significant purpose of this monster in the novel is to provide that eye-catching first line. There’s a ghost which is equally dramatic as possibility and pointless as a device. In fact, she throws in everything except the kitchen sink. There’s so much going on in this novel that it began to simply induce a feeling of exhaustion.
This was pure whimsy and over-exuberance from the word go. The premise of the entire novel is whimsical. A mother tells her daughter she does know who her father is despite claiming throughout her life that she didn’t but isn’t going to tell her who it is; she wants her daughter to research the conundrum. What we then get are a series of preposterous documents, testaments, portraits – a kind of dream succession of genealogical artefacts that explain every ancestor in his or her own words. Groff here tries her hand at David Mitchell style ventriloquism and fails miserably. All her characters, no matter what century or class or ethnicity they belong to speak in the same exuberant whimsical voice. They soon begin to blur into each other. Eventually I felt the whimsy employed was in large part to disguise the lack of artistry of this overly exuberant novel. It felt like the novel a precocious twelve year old girl with too much mental energy might write.
I think this was too ambitious for a first novel. It's motored by youthful exuberance rather than mental rigour. I found myself wondering if she wasn't under the spell of Krauss and Foer and David Mitchell before writing this. They were all the rage back then. I got the sense of a young writer imitating these writers in a struggle to find her own voice. And for me neither the quirkiness of Krauss/Foer nor the symphonic ventriloquism of Mitchell suits her. In Arcadia she goes back to basics. Straightforward storytelling without any post modernism pretence and I think this is the form that most suits her gift. For me, she’s not really an innovative writer. At least not yet. Her principle gift is she can write so well.
In conclusion, all I can say is thank heavens Groff gave up fancying herself as a comedian when she wrote her next two novels.
Family trees are fascinating. I love that programme Who do you think you are? We’d all like to know much more about our ancestors. To discover the long succession of complex twists of fate that enabled us to finally get born. To find out who her father is Willie Upton, the narrator, will trace her family history back to the founding fathers of the town she was born in.
The novel begins with a great sentence – “The day I returned to Templeton steeped in disgrace, the 50 foot corpse of a monster surfaced in Lake Glimmerglass.” However, the only really significant purpose of this monster in the novel is to provide that eye-catching first line. There’s a ghost which is equally dramatic as possibility and pointless as a device. In fact, she throws in everything except the kitchen sink. There’s so much going on in this novel that it began to simply induce a feeling of exhaustion.
This was pure whimsy and over-exuberance from the word go. The premise of the entire novel is whimsical. A mother tells her daughter she does know who her father is despite claiming throughout her life that she didn’t but isn’t going to tell her who it is; she wants her daughter to research the conundrum. What we then get are a series of preposterous documents, testaments, portraits – a kind of dream succession of genealogical artefacts that explain every ancestor in his or her own words. Groff here tries her hand at David Mitchell style ventriloquism and fails miserably. All her characters, no matter what century or class or ethnicity they belong to speak in the same exuberant whimsical voice. They soon begin to blur into each other. Eventually I felt the whimsy employed was in large part to disguise the lack of artistry of this overly exuberant novel. It felt like the novel a precocious twelve year old girl with too much mental energy might write.
I think this was too ambitious for a first novel. It's motored by youthful exuberance rather than mental rigour. I found myself wondering if she wasn't under the spell of Krauss and Foer and David Mitchell before writing this. They were all the rage back then. I got the sense of a young writer imitating these writers in a struggle to find her own voice. And for me neither the quirkiness of Krauss/Foer nor the symphonic ventriloquism of Mitchell suits her. In Arcadia she goes back to basics. Straightforward storytelling without any post modernism pretence and I think this is the form that most suits her gift. For me, she’s not really an innovative writer. At least not yet. Her principle gift is she can write so well.
In conclusion, all I can say is thank heavens Groff gave up fancying herself as a comedian when she wrote her next two novels.
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Reading Progress
| 07/15/2016 | marked as: | to-read | ||
| 08/28/2016 | marked as: | currently-reading | ||
| 08/30/2016 | page 40 |
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10.0% | "Typical first novel so far - exuberant, well-written without spectacular flourishes and a little bit loosely stitched." |
| 09/01/2016 | page 80 |
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20.0% | "I'm kind of glad Groff gave comedy a backseat after writing this because I'm finding the humour a bit too pleased with itself and not as funny as she clearly thinks it is. There's something of the slightly over exuberant undergraduate about this novel, especially in its difficulty of taking anything very seriously." 3 comments |
| 09/03/2016 | page 120 |
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31.0% | "The rather whimsical offhand tone is working better for me now!" |
| 09/06/2016 | page 200 |
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52.0% | "This has started rambling again. It's a very baggy novel which at times seems to lose sight of its directive." |
| 09/07/2016 | page 240 |
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62.0% | "I think this is just too ambitious for a first novel. It's motored by youthful exuberance rather than mental rigour and the problem for me is that every character carries this same exuberance and so is hard to tell apart. They all have the same atmosphere. As a result I'm afraid I'm beginning to find it a bit boring." |
| 09/11/2016 | page 300 |
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78.0% | "The rambling whimsy of this is irritating me. Her attempts at ventriloquism aren’t very convincing either. Makes me realise what a brilliant achievement Cloud Atlas was. Groff’s attempt to capture the voices of characters in different centuries is poor – none of the characters have a distinctive voice; all are just an extension of the author’s annoying whimsy and over-exuberance. Thank heavens Groff gave up comedy." |
| 09/12/2016 | marked as: | read | ||
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Not the place to start then, if I'm to tackle Groff. I think the name has, at long last, got lodged in a wrinkle of the grey matter.
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·Karen· wrote: "Not the place to start then, if I'm to tackle Groff. I think the name has, at long last, got lodged in a wrinkle of the grey matter."Nope. Skip this one, Karen. I think Arcadia might just be my favourite. She can be a bit annoying when she tries post modernism tricks. Arcadia is a good old old-fashioned novel!
Since our experiences of this one were so different, I almost want to reread it to see what I'd think of it now!
Your review makes me sad, Katie. I think it's the only think I've left to read from her. I've been really interested in it after reading her short story collection Delicate Edible Birds where in the first story she revisits Monsters of Templeton (I think). The short story was pretty great (and, yes, funny, to me anyway) and am still gonna read this someday, though with your thoughts in mind as I read it.
Kelly wrote: "I'm sorry you didn't like it!"Personal taste thing to some extent, Kelly. I'm not a great fan of quirky!
Teresa wrote: "Since our experiences of this one were so different, I almost want to reread it to see what I'd think of it now!"I wondered if she wasn't under the spell of Krauss and Foer and David Mitchell before writing this. They were all the rage back then. I got the sense of a young writer imitating in a struggle to find her own voice. And for me neither the quirkiness of Krauss/Foer nor the symphonic ventriloquism of Mitchell suits her. In Arcadia she goes back to basics. Straightforward storytelling without any post modernism pretence and I think this is the form that most suits her gift. For me, she’s not really an innovative writer. At least not yet. Her principle gift is she can write so well.
Snotchocheez wrote: "Your review makes me sad, Katie. I think it's the only think I've left to read from her. I've been really interested in it after reading her short story collection Delicate Edible Birds where in th..."I think short stories provide the perfect form for young writers to find their voice. A 500 page novel on the other hand is not. I feel a bit mean for being so harsh because first novels are almost always hit and miss. But the voice of this novel seemed contrived to me. It never felt like her true voice. An instinct to a large extent borne out by how different her voice is in both Arcadia and Fates & Furies.
I loved Krauss' novels (still have to try Mitchell), and even though I had never heard of Groff, I am able now to locate her in my literary outline thanks to this highly articulate review. "Arcadia" then, if I am ever to try this writer, thanks for the tip, Katie!
Groff’s got bags of talent, Dolors but I don’t think she’s got it in her locker to write a novel as magical as The History of Love (which could easily have been the title of this novel, just to confirm my hunch she was under Krauss’ spell). Both Arcadia and Fates & Furies are miles more accomplished than this. I’m slowly warming to Ebenezer. I think once I’ve got the hang of all the characters and how they relate to each other I’ll start enjoying it a whole lot more.
Katie wrote: "Groff’s got bags of talent, Dolors but I don’t think she’s got it in her locker to write a novel as magical as The History of Love (which could easily have been the title of this novel, just to con..."I have not read the Krauss yet. Something seems to be holding me back, but so many of my respected GR friends love it, so I do hope to read it one day.
Teresa wrote: "Katie wrote: "Groff’s got bags of talent, Dolors but I don’t think she’s got it in her locker to write a novel as magical as The History of Love (which could easily have been the title of this nove..."I loved History of Love, Teresa; wasn't so keen on Great House.




