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Bait & Switch (Alphas Undone, #1)
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bookshelves: alpha, contemporary, cheating, dual-pov, military
May 16, 2016
bookshelves: alpha, contemporary, cheating, dual-pov, military
Okay, so was the title supposed to be attention-grabbing and misleading? I assumed this would be centered around a suspenseful plot, but... no dice. The suspense portion was so vague that I'm not sure why it was even included.
Don't even get me started on the subplot. I abhor any OM/OW/triangle situation and this book seemed to be somewhat based on that. WTF?! First of all, let it be known to ALL authors, when the first scene of the story is the H having sex with another woman, at least let it be before he's met the h. Second, don't let that scene seem hotter than the sex with the h.
Hell to the Naw. Not the case here. Not only does Nolan extol the virtues of his sex partner and how great the sex was, immediately afterwards he's not only getting ready for his date with Lacey, but while getting ready, he can't stop ogling his sexy sex partner and letting her ogle him. While he's getting ready to go out with the h!! Not to mention that he also internally remarks about how different and special Lacey seems and how eager he is to have sex with her sexy ass. WTF??!!
So yeah, my interest in the story took a nose dive and Nolan could drop off a cliff for all I cared. I read the book because I'm not a quitter, however, their HFN was absolutely meaningless to me.
Enjoy! xo
Don't even get me started on the subplot. I abhor any OM/OW/triangle situation and this book seemed to be somewhat based on that. WTF?! First of all, let it be known to ALL authors, when the first scene of the story is the H having sex with another woman, at least let it be before he's met the h. Second, don't let that scene seem hotter than the sex with the h.
Hell to the Naw. Not the case here. Not only does Nolan extol the virtues of his sex partner and how great the sex was, immediately afterwards he's not only getting ready for his date with Lacey, but while getting ready, he can't stop ogling his sexy sex partner and letting her ogle him. While he's getting ready to go out with the h!! Not to mention that he also internally remarks about how different and special Lacey seems and how eager he is to have sex with her sexy ass. WTF??!!
So yeah, my interest in the story took a nose dive and Nolan could drop off a cliff for all I cared. I read the book because I'm not a quitter, however, their HFN was absolutely meaningless to me.
Enjoy! xo
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May 16, 2016
– Shelved
May 16, 2016
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alpha
May 16, 2016
– Shelved as:
contemporary
May 16, 2016
– Shelved as:
cheating
May 16, 2016
– Shelved as:
dual-pov
May 16, 2016
– Shelved as:
military
May 16, 2016
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