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Heat of the Moment by Elle Kennedy
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did not like it
bookshelves: genre-erotica, hot-sexy-smut, genre-novellas-short-stories

Why can't I stay away from short novellas when it's clear as hell they're not my thing? Hm? Damn!

68 pages of some hot sex, 3-4 characters and a non-existing plot.
Here's how i see things:
- there's a heat wave. Shelby, our heroine says heat waves always make her want to have sex.
- Shelby owns a bakery/coffee house. She opened on a Sunday for Navy SEALs to watch a game in the only place in town that had power.
- Then there's John Garrett. Shelby has been flirting with him for a year and he didn't seem interested. At all.
- Shelby hears Garrett and another guy talk about her, saying she's all vanilla, not interested in Garrett, that she doesn't have a wild side, that wouldn't in a million years go for a threesome, blah blah blah.
- Shelby says "oh, but wait. i'm not like that. I wanna have a threesome. It's been a fantasy of mine for so long." - or something like that. :rolling my eyes:
So she invites the dudes up to her apartment to have sex. <(view spoiler)
- The story ends with (view spoiler)

And that's it. Now tell me, how would you rate this?
I think the most disappointing thing is that it's written by "5 ★ Off Campus Trilogy Elle Kennedy".

In my humble opinion, if you wanna write an erotic novella, you should get inspired by Alexa Riley or something. I read her Trailer Park Virgin, which is off the charts hot, has no plot, just sex, taboo-ish sex if i might add and also 3 characters. But it's good enough for 60 pages of pure smut novella.

Thank God it was free on Amazon....
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Reading Progress

March 18, 2016 – Started Reading
March 18, 2016 – Shelved
March 18, 2016 – Shelved as: dfr
March 18, 2016 – Shelved as: to-read
March 18, 2016 – Shelved as: genre-erotica
March 18, 2016 – Shelved as: hot-sexy-smut
March 18, 2016 – Shelved as: genre-novellas-short-stories
March 18, 2016 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Michelle (new)

Michelle Ahh huni I m sorry this wasn't good 4 ya hope u enjoy your next book xxx

My Pink Fairytales Michelle wrote: "Ahh huni I m sorry this wasn't good 4 ya hope u enjoy your next book xxx"

Thanks hon :)

⚜️Charlotte⚜️ Hmmm...guess that's off my ;) xx

My Pink Fairytales ⚡️Charlotte⚡️ wrote: "Hmmm...guess that's off my ;) xx"

I would advise you not to lose your time with this one, though it's super short, like 1 hours reading or something.....

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