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Thy Daughter's Enemies by A.L. Meinhold
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really liked it

A.L. Meinhold has written a beautiful short fantasy here. Although this books seems to have been written for a younger audience, anyone who enjoys fantasy will enjoy it.

I would have liked to have seen a little more "showing" and a little less "telling". The editing could have been better, however minor formatting and editing issues don't annoy me too greatly when reading indie work.

The cover is full of beautiful color but I think it looks a little too much like a children's book instead of a YA novel.

Watreon is a believable place which is important in fantasy writing. The characters, while interesting and well thought out could have used a little more "fleshing" out to make them a little more memorable. Since this is the first in a series, I expect that A.L. Meinhold will probably do just that in the next edition.

I will be watching for the next installment.

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July 24, 2015 – Finished Reading
July 25, 2015 – Shelved

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