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Witches Protection Program by Michael Phillip Cash
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Witches, espionage and world domination in one story. Sounds like it should be a killer story, but it falls a little short.

The overall tone reads a little juvenile, like it was aiming for similar to the recently re-released The Witches. It didn’t quite get there.

The content of the story was somewhat more adult, with some complex relationship and societal intricacies that would have benefited from a more adult tone and language used.

Add to the above an almost comical jump into fantasy when it came to the abilities of some of the witches and I was struggling to suspend disbelief with each page turn.

I think the book would benefit from another edit to pick up the niggling typos like the ones I caught below, but also to help trim the puppy fat from the story and fix up the tone.

Is this a bad book? No, not by any stretch of the imagination. It has some rather unique ideas and characters. Just don’t go in expecting the next big thing and I think you’ll enjoy it.

It is a very quick read (despite it taking me months to finish it), the writing style lends itself to a quicker read.

Things I noticed:
4% - West(Wes) stared at the paper...
10% - ... create an organisation to protect woman (women)...
11% - ...unable to think of (an) answer...
59% - Alastair send(sent) me to chaperone...
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Reading Progress

July 2, 2015 – Shelved
July 2, 2015 – Shelved as: to-read
July 2, 2015 – Shelved as: blog-review-req
July 2, 2015 – Shelved as: indie-author
July 2, 2015 – Shelved as: indie-review-copies
December 14, 2020 – Started Reading
December 26, 2020 –
17.0%
December 30, 2020 –
22.0%
April 5, 2021 – Shelved as: editing-required
April 5, 2021 – Shelved as: 3-star-review
April 5, 2021 – Shelved as: fantasy
April 5, 2021 – Finished Reading

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