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The Dark Storm by Kris Greene
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May 28, 2010

did not like it
bookshelves: urban-fantasy, did-not-finish
Recommended to graveyardgremlin (formerly faeriemyst) by: my own idiot self
Recommended for: someone who likes editing and revising

I give up. Amateur writing, awkward dialogue, cliches, bad editing (no editing?), infodump overload, characters that have no personality or sympathy, and a convoluted plot all add up to a rough draft that needed several revisions before being published.
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Reading Progress

May 28, 2010 – Started Reading
May 28, 2010 – Shelved
May 28, 2010 – Shelved as: urban-fantasy
May 28, 2010 –
page 84
26.25% "After seeing the Amazon ratings, I wondered, could this be that bad? So of course I had to get it. And yeah, it is kinda bad. This book needs an editor stat!"
May 30, 2010 – Finished Reading

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Celeste Graham lol@ someone that likes editing and revising.


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