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The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr.
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May 02, 2010

it was ok
bookshelves: grammar

Had I read this a year ago, happily under the spell of nazism, I might have filled this little review with the kind of gleaming praise and happy diligence of the awakened; however, in the past year I was compelled to take up a few contemporary grammar and style guides and subsequently have developed a sore throat around these pills. I spit them out.

My grammar is not sparkling, nor even prone to an occasional gloss shimmer; nonetheless, a book of this sort does little to help the sheen. Its voice is commanding and the pressing of its commands outright to the reader leaves little space for compromise. The authority it has gained thereby, and particularly over young writers and students, is somewhat unnerving in its potential. It is troubling, in particular and general, that the book's tidiness comes at the cost of elaboration. A command is short and to the point, but it is not explicative. There are a few exceptions in which the categoricity of these commands is spelled out for the reader, but in most cases we are left alone with the word. So in these circumstances there is no knowing those rules that are worth following from those that are not.
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May 2, 2010 – Shelved
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July 28, 2012 – Finished Reading
August 8, 2012 – Shelved as: grammar

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message 6: by Kristen (new)

Kristen Do I seem especially angsty to you? I hate those songs actually but I was sure you liked them, and you post random song lyrics, why can't I? I learned it from you Dad, I learned it from watching you!

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message 9: by Kalanis (new)

Kalanis he's merely using language in his own way. just as you are. both of you rebelling against the commanding voice of Elements of Style

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