Initial Impressions 2/17/20: So far, most of my Goodreads friend reviews are mostly five-star ratings for this book and some four-star. How did weInitial Impressions 2/17/20: So far, most of my Goodreads friend reviews are mostly five-star ratings for this book and some four-star. How did we know I was going to be the black sheep here...? If you'd like to read a cynical/critical review, this is it!
First of all, the comparison to "Red Rising meets The Scorpio Races"... just no. I usually hate comparisons and this one is one terrible. They're two of my favorite books EVER with incredible character development, world-building, and plotting, and this book did not have it for me. The only Scorpio Races connection is the fact that it's a horse race and it's nothing else like TSR and Red Rising's plotting and character connections are far superior than this book. It was far more of a Hunger Games feel than RR or TSR.
I listened to this book on audio and all of the narrators are ones I've listened to before and really enjoyed, so I know it wasn't an issue of narrator. (Rebecca Soler, Lauren Fortgang, and Andrew Eiden, in case you were wondering!) When it comes to my fantasy preferences nowadays, I. Need. World-Building. The first paragraph of this book was the most interesting. There was a mention about nebulas in the sky and ... hey, that was it as far as the actual WORLD part of the world-building. Is this a fantasy world? Are we in space? Is this related to our galaxy? I immediately wanted to know more about the galaxies in the sky and where this book took place and we never really get to know. Not just that, but there's no real history about this fantasy world at all. There are plenty of mentions about "the gods" and how they're the gods of the Ashlords but there's not really much of anything else. We know that sacrifices happen, gods live in the underworld, and the Ashlords are connected to the gods above the others, but I don't even know anything about the country or town or divisions of any sort. There are a lot of things that don't come up in the book until they're needed so it just seems like a total afterthought. There are random leaders of each ... community? Town? See, I don't even know how this country (or whatever) is divided and why there are random leaders. Of course, the leader is oppressive and creepy and he shows up just to be awful and has no other significance whatsoever. Then there's this police force which doesn't show up until the end when all of a sudden they're necessary. Even with the races and the horses/phoenixes, there were things we didn't get to know until it was happening and everything was just told to us instead of actually learning about things in a more natural fashion. I also don't even know anything about the phoenixes at ALL...??? The synopsis said they were gifted to the Ashlords by the gods but we don't really get to learn about that at all, anywhere in the book. There are tiiiiny pieces but I barely know anything about them. The characters create/influence them with alchemy but we don't get to learn much about the alchemy other than being told what ingredients are used and we don't really get to know why or how it works. Where did they come from? Are they otherworldly beings? How do their rebirths work and why do they HAVE to do that? What's the magic system with what makes them different and how the riders use them? Why do riders have to happen and what do they gain from the races? Why are the races necessary? And so many more questions about gods and Ashlords and I COULD GO ON. I really can talk a LOT more about this but let's just say that there's really no history or world-building, or at least not nearly enough for my taste. I could have been incredibly invested if I even know what this world was about.
Most of this book is action. There's a lot of time spent spent talking about the races, which is fine! But everything else took a backseat, and for me, it really felt like EVERYTHING else.
I also really did not feel connected to the characters at all. There are three main characters but we barely get to know their personalities at all. Everything is basically about the race and we hardly get to see the characters interact with anyone of importance. We get some glimpses of Imelda and her friendships and her home life, but they're just glimpses. No real time is spent there and it's mainly just to set up other random parts of the story. The characters are very basic and don't really tell us much about their histories either.
There's one character POV that's in second person instead of the other two in first person and there's seemingly no reason why. I would hope there's an actual reason but it wasn't revealed in the first book and I won't be reading on so maybe I'll look it up later. It could have been interesting but it really didn't seem to serve a purpose here.
I'm sure there's more bubbling up inside my fountain of feelings here, but really, this one just did not do it for me. I don't know how I feel SO far off from everyone so far but it was interesting going into it with an open mind AND expecting like it and seeing what my true feelings were without any hype or any other expectations....more
Initial Impressions 2/4/20: Sadly, this is my least favorite of the series so far. A lot of time was spent going over things that already happened andInitial Impressions 2/4/20: Sadly, this is my least favorite of the series so far. A lot of time was spent going over things that already happened and I really didn’t like Jack recounting a story, telling it to the other characters. It felt like a huge case of snow instead of tell and because these stories are so short, I just didn’t have the tolerance to have a character tell about something that happened off-screen previously.
This book went back to the Moors, Jack & Jill’s world, but I guess I just wasn’t interested in spending more time there, as weirdly creepy as it is. I was looking forward to exploring something new and I think I’m just having a hard time getting the vibe of the overall series. Some are almost independent stories about a child and their door, and others push plot forward and have evolved a sort of murder mystery. But then we get this book and it’s not a new world and it kind of closes a chapter. I don’t know what happens from here. I actually don’t even know if there are more books. I was assuming so! While it may not be fair to the book, it just wasn’t what I was hoping for here. ...more
Initial Impressions 2/8/20: 3.5 - 3.75 stars, rounding up
I went into ALL THE STARS AND TEETH with an open mind because I haven't been getting alongInitial Impressions 2/8/20: 3.5 - 3.75 stars, rounding up
I went into ALL THE STARS AND TEETH with an open mind because I haven't been getting along with a lot of new YA fantasy lately. Catch me at the beginning of this book and I was raving about how happy I was that I was excited, interested, and swooning over bantery pirates! The more I read, the less interested I became and by the end, I felt like I just wanted to know what happened and how the book would end.
I didn't totally love Amora throughout the whole book, but it was easier to understand her in the beginning of the book because she didn't know what was going on and it was interesting to follow her while she was figuring everything out. There was a lot for her to discover throughout the whole book but for some reason it was easier for me to connect with her in the beginning of the book. I loved Bastian, our sassy pirate, and he added so much to the beginning of the book! He and Amora had some great chemistry and of course, I loved the cleverness. I also really liked Ferrick who added something really nice to the group dynamic. I don't want to go too far into it because there's a lot that happens in the beginning and I don't want to spoil anything, but I liked that he became a part of the book and that he was the kind of "nice guy".
I think Adalyn Grace packed a lot of punches in the beginning of the book that I wasn't expecting, including Bastian, who he was, and why he was there, so it was really exciting! She didn't save every twist until the very end and I was really happy to see some things to help kick off the book. The pacing was pretty consistent throughout the book but there was a point in the middle where I had to put the book down and I wasn't able to come back for a week and then.... I just a hit a stall in interest. Things didn't quite pick up again like I had hoped and there were moments when I found Amora more irritating while she was discovering some of the politics of her world.
The magic system and world building were pretty cool but I also felt like they could have been developed a liiiiittle bit more for me to really latch onto them. It still felt like a lot about the magic was thrown in at the beginning, which I guess you kind of need in order to understand some parts of the world, but I almost wanted to discover it a little more slowly because some parts of the magic and world-building felt like a bit of an info dump. There's a bit of a journey in the middle and there are some pieces of some of the magics that are explored but there's not really a reason why or how or how much. Magic doesn't always need a why because sometimes that's just a part of what the world is, but I felt like I needed just a bit more than "everyone has magic and here's what they can do".
I'm a little bummed because I really did love the beginning so much and I was talking it up, but I just really lost interest towards the end and just wanted to be done reading it. It wasn't bad at all but I felt like it started off as something special and different and then it just fell into the pattern of the average YA fantasy novel. ...more
Initial Impressions 10/6/19: 3.5 stars This wasn’t my favorite of the series but still enjoyable! I felt a little detached in the beginning, possiblyInitial Impressions 10/6/19: 3.5 stars This wasn’t my favorite of the series but still enjoyable! I felt a little detached in the beginning, possibly because I’m used to binge reading these and it’s been a while since I read the previous book! But I think even if I was still able to read this one immediately after book 9, I still would feel the same way for the most part.
The ending was really good and there were a lot of interesting elements! It started to bring around a sense of finality (is 11 the last book? It kind of sounds like it!) and really stepped some plot points up in many ways. ...more
Initial Impressions 1/21/20: 3 stars I seem to be in the minority having not really enjoyed this one as much as I had hoped. A CURSE SO DARK AND LONELYInitial Impressions 1/21/20: 3 stars I seem to be in the minority having not really enjoyed this one as much as I had hoped. A CURSE SO DARK AND LONELY was one of my favorite books of 2019 and I didn't feel the excitement and the pull as much as I did reading the first book.
So A HEART SO FIERCE AND BROKEN is split up into two POVs like ACSDAL, except this time it's two total different characters. We see Grey and new face, Lia Mara, daughter of the queen of Syhl Shallow. I think part of the reason I didn't enjoy this book as much was because I really enjoyed the different voices of Rhen and Harper with Harper having modern speech and Rhen being more antiquated to simulate the more regal tone often adopted with high fantasy locations. I really enjoyed the contrasting narratives and the difference between the two also brought some levity to the book since Harper had to learn about Rhen's world and Rhen had to understand things that Harper said that made no sense away from the "real world". I really wanted more of that contrasting narrative from someone from Earth/the US and someone from Emberfall and I think that had really added a lot of character to the story that I was missing here.
I seemed to love Grey more as a side character than from his actual POV. He's easy to empathize with but I liked the mystery of him more, I think, and I really liked seeing him through Harper's eyes. His own POV just didn't appeal to me as much and I was more bored than intrigued. Lia Mara was a nice new addition but I really would have liked to see her (did we see her in the first book?) or at least remember her so she was already an established character. Really what I would have liked to see would have been a handful of Rhen/Harper chapters to keep their story moving forward. I really, really missed them in this book and it didn't feel the same without them. I felt like Harper's voice was weaker seeing it from someone else's POV and Rhen was essentially villainized and I don't want another ACOTAR situation here, because that's exactly what it felt like.
There is a twist at the end, but to be honest, I didn't care for it. It's tired and it's been done and I would have much rather seen Rhen and Grey duke it out with other factors holding them back instead of .... this. I don't want to spoil anything but it's not where I was hoping this would go at all and I'm really not thrilled about it. I am hoping we get to see all four POVs, maybe, in the last book. (Is it the last?)
I really think this could have been a two-book series (which is what I thought it would be), cutting out a lot of traveling (you know how much I hate and get bored by journeys in books) and cutting down a lot of the random stops along the way from Emberfall to Syhl Shallow and back again. I just didn't love the structure, I didn't love the POVs, and I didn't love the ending, so this was more of a disappointment to me. I really wasn't engaged while reading and it was fine but I won't be raving about it any time soon. ...more