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message 1: by Erin (new)

Erin Oneilbaker The first mention of detritus didn't bother me, but after the 6th time to describe the same yard.....

message 2: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Yes, this: "Most of the descriptive writing is eloquent, but at times it could have used better editing." And, more especially, this: "Now I'm looking for something that does not use the word detritus once." Those were almost my exact thoughts while read/listening. I gave it 4 stars because of the reading of the Audible version, but really the writing was a 3-star from me, for the above reasons. Spot on, Linda.

message 3: by Jen (new)

Jen Completely agree about the word detritus. One of my pet peeves with this book.

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