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message 1: by Charles (new)

Charles The writing-style of the author was appalling.


message 2: by Marcia (new)

Marcia Chocinsky Only on p 81, and I’m not really a SF buff, but the writing is making it difficult to read. I agree with the above. See p34. Paragraph (1) starting with Irina. The last sentence is about 85% of the paragraph and contains 12 commas and runs on and on. Amazing, but not in a good way.


message 3: by Charles (new)

Charles Marcia wrote: "Only on p 81, and I’m not really a SF buff, but the writing is making it difficult to read. I agree with the above. See p34. Paragraph (1) starting with Irina. The last sentence is about 85% of the..."

Wot I thought.


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