Marie Lutz I didn't like the kidnapper talking about what they did. I also found the beginning very repetitious. Actually the whole book was repetitious. I only got through it by skinmmimg and skipping a lot.
Sienna Vegan Bitch Yes! Only in the second chapter now and I'm glad it isn't anything like the prologue
Diana Ford Yes, I don't know why the author felt compelled to write that character from that perspective and with the "you". It was creepy and not in a good way. Poorly executed to say the least.