If and when you get someone to edit your book ... make very sure they don't change it in the editing. This is your story, your way of telling it. Keep a copy of your book before anyone changes anything and don't let that copy ever be changed. You see, in the changing of my first book, it lost the story and gained proper English. I am a story teller, that is how I help people understand how to feel good. I don't story tell in proper English, and proper paragraphs ended up telling my story in a different way.