I perused the preview and found it quite interesting, however, why didn't you separate the dialogue between the characters (everything seems to run together)? Nevertheless, it appears to be the making of a good reading book. By all means continue your endeavors.

Cinquanta Cox-Smith Thanks as a new writer of was unsure of how to present this. So, this is one of the things I am working on for my new book.

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