Jessslittleambee
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I finished reading this last night and I found the actual storyline without the sex parts to be bland does anyone else feel the same?
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Shomeli Dey
yes we do....minus the sex part what else is there?if you take a note in your diary it will be finished in 7 sentences.sex acts as filler, as a means for communication, as recreation, and as means to feel gideon and eva more connected /in sync with each other.other than that what else is there to make it push for more?even in fifty shades series, the writer uses sex for plot purposes and glosses over the unnecessary parts like it was in fifty shades free and so does sylvian reynard in her trilogy.when it comes to erotic romance her plot construction is weaker than her contemporaries in incorporating sensual parts as an organic whole
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