Chad Simpson asked:
I liked this, but... My biggest problem is that Pat feels the need to explain what he's doing both before and after the novella. Pat: Just publish your story and let it live. If people hate it, your forward and endnote aren't going to change anything. Being so self-aware, unconfident and almost apologetic as an author can be a turn off. It takes me out of your world. Anyone else feel like this?
JD-Reads-Books I get where your comment is coming from but I don’t actually agree. I enjoyed reading both the forward and the afterword. It’s like a glimpse behind the scenes and I liked reading them.