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there.
two-handed strike.
How is she making a two handed strike with one arm immobilized?
kitten.
cat.
It’s not like the world would explode if she took her attention off it for a few days.
Cue the apocalypse! If this isn't foreshadowing, I don't know what is.
a plan
‘a plan’
Alger was a human, meaning he was basically a monkey who thought it was better than other monkeys by virtue of speech and murder.
Chimpanzees have been observed in the act of murder, so speech and technology are the only things the set us apart from other apes.
year or
year, or
off
Delete this word. It is redundant a badly placed.
Brunic
Burnic
Brumic
Burnic
Brumic
Burnic
Brumic
Burnic
Brunic.
Burnic.
Brunic
Burnic
Brunic
Burnic
Brunic’s
Burnic’s
Why did they sell scissors in packages that required scissors to open?
Because a knife works just as well to cut them open.
the
a
dinosaurs.
dragons.
dinosaur
dinosaurs
crossbow
crossbows
it,
them,
blunt
brunt
forming
Delete this word; it is recundant.
If these stories had been written down epics, Tira estimated they’d take five volumes to cover everything.
Nice temporal reference to synch up with the Keldora series.
theory
hypothesis
theories,”
hypotheses,”
“It’s the same as electrum, but instead of silver and gold, it’s mithril and gold. The alloy itself I’m calling flexium.
Occultions and flexium. Whatever this Aelif’s strong suits were, naming certainly wasn’t one of them.
I think the names are perfect. They convey their meanings fairly well without requiring contextual clues to do so.
“Until then…it’s been theorized there must be a way to permanently kill them, but we don’t know what it is.”
“Until then…it’s been hypothesized there must be a way to permanently kill them, but we don’t know what it is.”
If they had a "theory" they would know how to permanently kill them. A theory is a hypothesis that is know to be factual and capable of accurate predictions of results for a given set of known facts.
his Udahraptor
Remove the (return) between these two words.
not
Delete this word. It is redundant.
mindset.
mindsets.
go
gone
your
my
Stygian.
‘Stygian.’
superpowers if
superpowers, if
furious.
furiously.
crack,
crick,
[five
five
from
by
all
Delete this word; it's unnecessary.
third
fourth
as pseudo
as a pseudo
extinct…that’s
extinguished…
into
Delete this word. It is redundant.
would a
would do a
possible
Delete this word. It is redundant.
to
by
eventually
Delete this word; it is redundant.
