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She’s wearing six-inch heels
That's basically impossible. 4" heels are high, 6" would require a significant platform.
holding out her hands, putting herself physically between them.
That's twice in the last like 10 pages someone has "put themselves physically" between two other people.
She is wearing a bright blue jacket and white salopettes that look fresh off the peg, and her buttercup hair is sticking out around her hood.
She should be wearing a helmet. I mean maybe it's under the hood, but if it's as cold as they say they would be wearing balaclavas under the helmets. No one wears a scarf to ski.
She is wearing a bright red ski jacket—scarlet silk
Silk. Are you kidding me? That is NOT a fabric for a ski jacket.
We passed over the run in the lift a few minutes ago, and it looked like a sheer sheet of ice,
OK but it's been snowing. So how could the ice be showing.
Topher comes in wearing ski gear and thick socks,
Ski socks are actually thin. But maybe he changed socks.
salopettes.
I had to look this up.
there are people trapped on lifts and stuff.
The resort is closed - it was closed hours ago. And no one was on that bubble lift when they went up.
Four were lift stations that were confirmed empty, since the lifts had been closed earlier that day.
So why would she say people were trapped on the lifts?
mean it’s a bit suspicious full stop that he managed to get reception when none of the rest of us did.
what's with the the "full stop?" If it's supposed to be there set it off with punctuation.
the patter of snow against the window.
What is with people thinking falling snow makes noise? It's weirdly quiet because it muffles sounds as it builds up. If it's making noise it's not snow, it's freezing rain.
Oh god, this is not what I am good at. I am good at filing, and taking notes, and making sure everything adds up. I am good at tidying up loose ends and keeping everything straight. I am task-oriented and time-conscious and detail-focused. And I am very, very good at making myself invisible. In short, I was a perfect PA. But I am not cut out for this.
"tidying up loose ends" sounds suspicious
My helmet and goggles are down in the locker room.
Oh now they have helmets?
we know she was stuck on the bubble lift when Eva actually died,
was written up as a tragic accident. There were drugs and alcohol in his system and people; they just assumed that he fell I suppose,
What is with the semi-colon after people? like there were drugs and alcohol and people in his system. Ellipses would make more sense. Or just "people just assumed he fell."
