she was fed up with waiting for Jeremy to get over his grief.
You are also fed up with him not making a move as a MARRIED MAN so don’t you dare go on talking like you are any better like you both are making terrible choices and thinking terrible thoughts but only one is gaining my sympathy because she is also a fucking victim in all this while you are here to do her job, not be creepy and disgusting and worm your way into her family. You have no excuses or ways to make your actions make any sense other than for your own selfish gain. Like I rather read anything else than read more of you bitching and whining about some woman who you don’t really know. Yes she is writing her life out in this autobiography draft but there is clearly an unhealthy pattern of her co dependency and how it formed her life in a way that’s all about Jeremy and not really about her and how she was basically forced to have his children when she didn’t want them and it’s evident that she needed serious help like omg AND YOU SEEM TO FORGOT THE ONE THING THAT FUCKED THINGS OVER WITH YOU AND COREY, THE THINGS YOU WRITE MIGHT NOT EXACTLY PORTRAY WHO YOU ARE IN REAL LIFE. We get 24/7 access to your mind and thoughts and they are so fucked up but you think you are better in comparison when in actuality, you are the best fucking person like you even sound the same. When it comes to verity’s parts, you sound like you are making a mocking voice but it’s still feel like Lowen
I think it would have made for a better horror book if you leaned in on evil Jeremy (aka he and lowen are actually villains in this anyhow) who tricks Lowen into murdering Verity and wrote this whole manuscript to trick her into doing his dirty work then get away with the murder. Or maybe trying to replace verity with lowen in a very lifetime but better way OR even have it be similar to that one movie where verity is sadly dead but haunting the home in order to try to get lowen to figure out that Jeremy did in fact kill her after he found the manuscript and now lowen has to figure out how to get proof out and get crew and herself safely out of there. OR leaned into the whole sleepwalking spookiness like have lowen wake up almost murdering bitches like make this interesting OR even be like sinister or that orphan movie where crew is the one who killed the sisters and got his mom to have the car accident, maybe Jeremy either knows and is protecting him or he doesn’t and lowen figures it out and tries to collect proof to show him, just give me something, ANYTHING!
Okay I’ll end the note now because I could continue rambling on if I don’t stop myself now
