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Basically this book is just telling ladies “hey if he wears you down, he could be the one” while it’s telling men “hey you can wear her down, just don’t give up or take no for an answer” which I think is a harmful and dangerous message to be taken from this stupid book with a terrible love interest and a poor protagonist who suffers so much just to be “saved” by this holier than thou man who acts like he is the answer to her prayers.
Okay all this shaming is really bad and sad to hear/read, I wish the portrayal of these women was something more united and showing togetherness since they all understand their own dire situations so I’d like to think they all could have each others backs when no one else does, they are all just trying to survive
You don’t get to judge her you asshole, she didn’t ask for you to come and waste your money (gold dust) just to talk and try to somehow convince her to run off and be your wife so you don’t get to be mad and angry at her that she isn’t doing what you want and now you lost a lot of gold dust, in your own words, “all for nothing”
If only she could be like one of those mountain men who went out into the wilderness and stayed there, hunting their food and building their own shelter and never having to answer to another living soul for anything. Just to be left alone, that must be heaven.
This should have been her destiny. This was her dream, why couldn’t she have the one thing she wanted
“How many men have I served so you can stuff yourself like a pig and dress up like a grotesque parody of royalty? Duchess from where? Duchess of what? You’re nothing but a fat old harlot no man wants anymore!”
He couldn’t escape her. She danced before him, like Salome before King Herod.
Someone took her hand. She thought it was Lucky at first, but Lucky’s hand was soft and small. This one was large and hard, the skin rough with calluses. “Just say yes.”
Coercion, really Michael?? This is not the time or place to be trying to propose to Sarah/angel, she is beaten up and falling into unconsciousness so stop!!
Worse, she had to rely on him for food, water, shelter—everything.
Her utter dependency on him chafed bitterly. She was raw with it. And she hated him...
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Angel felt a trap closing in on her.
With nothing else to occupy her, she did. And he was right. The silence changed, and she heard sounds breaking through. It was like the rain used to be when she put out the shiny tins in the dark little shack.
Poor angel, she deserves so much better than “I’m a nice guy” incel Michael. You suck my guy
Also the whole beating angel almost to death was a lot like she is so vulnerable right now and hear Michael walks up like a little creep thinking “here’s my chance to trap her as my wife” disgusting piece of sh*t
ALSO clearly the author is not able to properly write about all these kinds of things like abuse and the difference between sex work and prostitution and child trafficking AND how to practice empathy apparently, it’s clear in her writing and I wish she just never tried to handle this subject and MAKE IT INTO A LOVE STORY
HE IS GROOMING HER, he is 26 and she is 18, ugh sicko
He should have helped her be able to work her way into getting her own little place like a cabin and be self sufficient because that’s what she truly wants, respect her dreams asshole
When she falls for him, that is literally Stockholm syndrome
Finally, Angel stood on her own feet.
Look if he respected her, he would have waited for her to show the same feelings toward him that he has for her. Wouldn’t it be better if she reciprocated them as your wife I mean, you forced her into a marriage she didn’t want and you are just trying to wear her down because she has no other options and you are exploiting her when she is in a vulnerable state. I believe the gestures would have been more genuine and wonderful if he didn’t marry her while she was almost unconscious and barely able to understand what was happening (consent cannot be given if she is not in her most sober, consciously aware state) like couldn’t you just be a good person, a good Christian even, and help this woman by just giving her the food, shelter, and time to heal and then let her decide what she wants without having to deal with being tied to a man she is obviously uncomfortable with 🙄🙄

