Bone Lord (Bone Lord, #1)

by Dante King

woman, a naked woman with long, shapely legs, flared hips curving smoothly into a narrow waist and a silky belly. Her big round tits sat gloriously atop their hourglass pedestal, gleaming a dark, slick crimson in the dancing light of the burning torches.

Really? r/menwritingwomen

distinctly feminine scream. “No, please!” screamed the mystery girl. “Please don’t hurt me!” “Step out and show yourself, and maybe I won’t.” The girl obeyed… and for a moment, words failed me.

I'm going to have to stop here. Frankly, it,s borderline offensive already and adding a woman who took his breath away? This book wil unfoubtedly

Looking at her tantalizing body, concealed so frustratingly beneath that frumpy white robe, there were many things I’d love for her to do that I couldn’t do myself.

That is so gross and offensive. This book feels strangely like an incel wrote it. What was i expecting? Its name is "Bone Lord" for god's sakes. Talk about telegraphing your plot.