It’s my first time on a motorcycle, my first time running away from home, and my first time dressing so daringly.
This character is so exhausting. Girl, all you did was put on jeans, a T-shirt, and a choker with some heels and a jacket…..and you aren’t running away, you’re an adult going to a party. I hate when writers feel the need to remind the reader how innocent and young the MC is.
