Sally-Ann

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All might not have been lost for the Trojans. The Greeks were as confused and bewildered by events as they were. If they could have mustered a force and got down to the old Greek ditch, and held firm, they could still have pushed the Greeks back into the sea.
Sally-Ann
The "they" from the third sentence should be contintuing the subject of the Greeks but I think we have moved back to the Trojans. Badly constructed paragraph
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