Kindle Notes & Highlights
Exhausted, Cole sank onto the pile of blankets Elly had made into a bed on the floor for them. Every room was staked out, with Joe taking one last night in his own room. Elly had claimed a small
Elly made a bed for "them", meaning Elly and Cole on the floor, but then claimed a room upstairs. Should "them have been "him" or should "Elly claimed" been someone else claimed?
and
"had"
rushed f forward.
Extra "f"
to a dinner
to AT dinner time
women.
Should this be "woman"?
Now,
"now" ?
Amanda’s
This is the first mention of her name
He
He is
Amanda knew
Amanda "if she" knew
think have
think "we" have
Hunter had had to terms
Hunter had had to terms
Hunter had to come to terms
food,, but
extra comma
that had something that had something
Repeated phrase
