Kindle Notes & Highlights
by himself
No period at end of sentence
east.
Why would Shaw be heading east. He had been in Washington DC. He nust got off a bus in Kanas.
Daisy might wonder where I’ve got to.”
Gone to??
self-defence
on the speed limit. Dark
At the speed limit??
hardness of her breasts crushed
Breasts are soft. Nipples are hard
bristles
No woman wants to hear her pubic hairs are bristles
adjusting her hips, Jazz moved slightly under her,
Why is the horse under her when she got off
the other night in the bunkhouse.
Last night
whilst
When writing about an American town...use American English
She wanted to drown in it
No period at the end of the sentence
“I was looking forward to seeing her. It has been a while.
Didnt she see her last night?
So she stoked the griller on the front veranda with wood, lit it
We are in America.. Not England
She wanted him to stay for longer,
The word for isnt needed
eight boxes
Stalls??
whilst
Mr Shaw,”
wrecking bar in her hands. “Will this do?”
Crowbar??? Again with British
I was after an Edward Linton please.”
homestead
House
They had lost all but three horses.
Was stated the previous paragraph
the pin board
Peg board??
As soon as Giles saw what Shaw was carrying the insults stopped, replaced with silence and abject horror in his eyes.
Insults?? His mouth has tape on it
gathering community.
took her bearings.
and took her bearings again.
kitted-up Shaw knew they had done
dim-witted men they could train-up.
