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Next to her, Danny was picking at a speck of dirt clinging to his dirty blond hair. Danny, like Gaby and Nate, hadn’t escaped Texas unscathed. They were bruised and battered and wounded,
How can he pick at a speck of dirt in his hair that he can't see? How does he even know it's there???
but Danny had managed to come through it mostly, well, Danny.
The last word seems unneccessary. Does not make sense!!!
He set his feet to both sides of the unmoving figure below him and went into a slight crouch. There was no point in attacking a second time. His victim wasn’t going to fight back. He couldn’t, even if he wanted to.
It's not his 'victim', but his attacker!!!!
“Does Rhett know about this?” Keo asked. “No. Any other questions?” “Nah, that’ll do.” Keo reached up with his bound hands and brushed at a thick patch of blood over his right eye. “Can I at least stand up before you shoot me? I’d hate to die on my knees. It’s the gentlemanly thing to do.”
On page 119 it said that Keo's hands were bound BEHIND his back. If so, then that's a neat trick he did brushing his right eye with his bound hands!!!
Don’t like Texas weather? Wait five minutes, she thought with a smile.
Seems like they say that in just about every state!!!! LOL
She was thinking about Nate, about how much he must be hating her right now, when she heard him coming up. That shouldn’t have been possible at all—first climbing up the ladder behind her, then walking across the floor. She could even hear the rustling of the trench coat against the cold night air.
Even though the trench coat is all shredded to hell?????
So he only hissed, “Yes.” “I keep forgetting how different you are from the run-of-the-mill ghoul. Are all the other blue eyes like you?” “Not like me.” “You know what I mean. I know they’re not like you. Thank God for that. I meant in terms of everything else.”
Wouldn't it be better if some of the other blue eyed ghouls WERE like Will/Frank???
“You have an awful lot of trust in this Frank guy,” Rhett said. He died and came back for us. For me. How do you not have faith in someone who did that for you? she thought, but said, “You would too, if you knew him as well as we did.”
"....as we do."
'did' is past tense.
“You said they were only two hours away. I didn’t know they could move that fast.” “The M1 Abrams are faster than you think, especially when they can open up on a highway.”
Where are they getting fuel for the tanks??? It's over a year old and those Abrams use a LOT of fuel!!!!!
