I begged my mouth to finish the question, to stay awake long enough to hear this new answer, but I was slipping, slipping, slipping, and there, in a grave colder than Mars, next to the soul I’d loved for a hundred lives and lost in every one, we took our final breath beneath the indifferent stars.
i hate when paragraph structure like this is put in published books. it still feels very fanfic-y to me
theres other ways to write this in actual paragraphs
also sidenote if youre gonna do paragraphs like this make it fit your writing style. like doing this with the level this author is writing at feels like a very juvenile decision
