Amelia’s Comments (group member since Jan 03, 2013)

Amelia’s comments from the Write a Story group.

Geneva wrote: "thanks! :D What's Shifted about? "
No problem! :)
It started off to be about a a team of agents who had to do something to try to save the world as they knew it. But they failed and now they must learn to adapt to what is left of Earth.

At the moment, I don't know exactly as it has started to change into a fantasy type story (which is not my normal area of expertise). I've resorted to letting the characters drive the show now and only getting bits and pieces about the world they are in. One cool aspect is that the countries are run by a council.

Geneva wrote: "In the past, when that's happened, I've usually just type about it for the view from a different character for a while. That, or move to different story for a bit."

What if I haven't written anything from his point of view yet? I just can't get into his head to know what he is all about. It's completely frustrating knowing his quest is important but not knowing why. *sigh*

His sister on the other hand just loves to be in the limelight lol

My main male character Zed, is pretty much doing his own thing(apparently on some sort of quest in the "badlands" or whatever) and I know absolutely nothing about what is going on.
I was wondering what do you all do when one of your main characters is hiding from you?

Geneva wrote: "help think of a better one for Dragongirl, please!"

Hey Geneva, I don't know if you've found a better title or not but I thought I'd give it a shot :) How about Drak Femme? (Drak means dragon in Czech and I believe Femme is French for girl/woman)

Sariah *The Connecticut shooting hurts my heart.* wrote: "NEW IDEA:
Area 51
Awesome (or so I think) story idea. Terrible title. Hellllp?"

Hey Sariah, I found this on wikipedia and I thought this might be helpful in coming up with another name for your idea:

Though the name Area 51 is used in official Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) documentation,[5] other names used for the facility include Dreamland, Paradise Ranch,[6][7] Home Base, Watertown Strip, Groom Lake,[8] and most recently Homey Airport.[9] The area is part of the Nellis Military Operations Area, and the restricted airspace around the field is referred to as (R-4808N),[10] known by the military pilots in the area as "The Box" or "the Container".[11]

I think The Box would be a great title. Very mysterious. :D

I'm Bonnie or you can call me B if you like :) My story is called "Shifted" as I can't think of a better name for it and because it did shift from being a post-apocalyptic world to more of a fantasy based world.