Kai’s Comments (group member since Aug 14, 2019)

Kai’s comments from the Navigating Indieworld Discussing All Things Indie group.

I'm Kai, a queer developmental, stylistic and copy editor for Fantasy, Science Fiction, speculative fiction, LGBTQ+, and YA. With six years of traditional and non-traditional experience in the field, I can help you achieve your storytelling goals, whether you're an aspiring author or an established writer!

Getting feedback on your work is not always easy, which is why I focus on providing honest, kind, constructive comments along with plenty of suggestions and problem-solving techniques to help you refine and improve dialogue, character development, plot, world-building and pacing. I take your needs and wishes into account and always ensure to preserve your unique voice.

As a detail-oriented, sensitive and analytical editor coming from the world of literature, I can help you create memorable and compelling worlds that come to life for the reader.

In addition, I have edited published academic articles and papers in social sciences, arts, literature, gender studies, Jewish Studies and Culture, LGBTQ+ studies and history. As a trans non-binary, queer and Jewish professional, I also do sensitivity reading on these topics.
Whether you need developmental/substantive editing, copyediting, proofreading, stylistic/line editing, manuscript evaluation, beta reading or sensitivity reading, I can help!

Sound good? Email me at kai.benshahar@gmail.com for a free 30 minute video consultation!