Zoe’s Comments (group member since Apr 16, 2022)

Zoe’s comments from the A New Dawn - (Warriors RP) group.

Adela's Characters
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Name: Heatherclaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 42 moons
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality: Gentle when needed, a good-humoured but often gruff cat
Appearance: Stocky, brindled tabby
Mate: None
Kits: None
Parents: (may edit later)
Siblings: (may edit later)
Likes: Plump prey, especially pheasants
Dislikes: Any threats or insults
Strengths: Being heavy, can fight when necessary
Weaknesses: Gets out of breath easily

Mitsouri's Characters
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Name:Owlwhisper{Before Owlkit,Owlpaw}
Gender:She-Cat/Molly
Age:45 moons
Rank:Medicine-cat
Personality:A bossy,stubborn and compassionate she-cat how is always helping her clan
Apparence:A long furred white she-cat with gray stripes and bright ice-blue eyes
Mate:None
Crush:None,but used to be Pigeonwing when she was a apprentice{StC member, used to be a warrior of SC;Tom;Not playable}
Kits:None
Parents:Grayshine{SC elder;She-cat;RP:Open} & Minnowfur{StC member, used to be a senior warrior of SC;Tom;Not playable, open for used to be mentor}
Mentor:Dustlegs{StC member, used to be a medicine-cat of SC;Tom;Not playable, open for prophecies}
Siblings:Toadstar{StC member, used to be leader of SC;Tom;More in my adoptables section}
History:Owlkit have been born alongside her littermate Toadkit,she always like to run around and help the camp with all she could do,her father have order that his kits would become warriors,and she is happy with that.But when a pack of dogs attack the camp,she got badly injured and develop a friendship with Dustlegs,then she start training as a medicine-cat.After Dustlegs death,she turned into the only medicine-cat of the clan and are always busy,her brother become the leader and she was really happy for him,they pass more time together utill the big disaster,where she lose her brother and father.The she-cat start blaming herself thinking that the rains are part of a prophecy from Starclan,and she make a promise to make the best for the clan as her brother do
Likes:Observe clanmates,help her clanmates
Dislikes:War or fight,water
Fears:Lost everyone she loves,fell in water
Strengths:She knows a lot about herbs and used to be a good hunter
Weakness:She's not good at fight and swim

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Name:Finchheart{Before Finchkit, Finchpaw}
Gender:Tom
Age:187 moons
Rank:Elder
Personality:A lazy, selfish tom who likes everything to go his way. He's been known to nose where he shouldn't and give advice when he's not sleeping in his nest
Apparence:A ginger tabby tom with dark swirls and amber eyes, its muzzle and paws are slightly white. He has some barely seeable scars on his nose
Mate:Lostear{StC member, used to be an elder of SC;She-cat;Closed}
Crush:None
Kits:Open for creation, Dustlegs{StC member, used to be a medicine-cat of SC;Tom;Closed}
Parents:Unknown
Mentor:Unknown
Siblings:Unknown
Apprentice:Open for creation
History:Finchheart is the oldest elder of the Stormclan, he was born to two warriors who wanted him to become a medicine-cat to be part of something important in the Stormclan, but another apprentice was chosen in his place to the sadness of his parents. Finchpaw was a very brave apprentice though and his courage was always admired until he became a warrior by the name of Finchheart, with fifteen moons. During a patrol, he and his clanmate, Morningdapple, ended up in a battle with a badger that caused her to lose one of her ears and was renamed Lostear, her hideous appearance caused her mate to stray further from her
Fincheart, who secretly loved her, confronted the tom-cat and the two began to get along so well that they became mates. Finchheart became an elder after almost drowning, which caused him to lose part of his hearing
He watched other elders die during their long journeys, although life passed before his eyes, he was happy to be by Lostear's side. But her time came, she died after stumbling over a dangerous mountain, he continued to mourn her death for a long time until the great storm, there he saw several other clanmates die in front of him. After this, he became lazy and selfish tom who didn't mind fighting for his own rights
Likes:Sleep all day, intrude on his clanmates' conversation
Dislikes:Having to walk or do a very tiring and/or time-consuming duties, being forced to do something
Fears:Adders and storms
Strengths:He's very wise, having lived a lot and learned from the mistakes of his clanmates in the meantime.
Weakness:Because of his age, he's lazy and doesn't like to exert himself in any warrior duties

Mitsouri's Characters
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Name:Smokekit{Later Smokepaw,Smokeclaw}
Gender:Tom
Age:3 moons
Rank:Kit
Personality:A quiet and rude tom,he can be really cold and short tempered,but also determined
Apparence:A long furred gray smoked tom with leaf-green eyes
Mate:Really young for that
Crush:None(When he become a app is open)
Kits:Really young for that
Parents:Iceblossom{BC queen;She-cat;RP:Zoe} and Shadowtail{BC warrior;Tom;RP:Mitz}
Siblings:Spiderkit{BC kit;She-cat;RP:Zoe;Littermate}, Snowkit{BC kit;Tom;RP:Zoe;Littermate}, Fallenkit{BC kit;She-cat;RP:Open;Littermate}, Mintkit{BC kit;She-cat;RP:Sky;Foster sister}
History:Smokekit have been born alongside with Spiderkit, Snowkit and Fallenkit from Iceblossom and Shadowtail, Smokekit is always trying to impress his father and clan, even when his father don't give him any attention.
Likes:Bother his littermates, be the best in everything, talk with warriors and recieve compliments.
Dislikes:Feel weak, lose, be called weak.
Fears:Not become a warrior
Strengths:He is a kit but have a good pounce and climb really well
Weakness:He is easy angry and it may be a problem when he became a apprentice

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Name:Shadowtail{Before Shadowkit, Shadowpaw}
Gender:Tom
Age:27 moons
Rank:Warrior
Personality:A wise and thoughtful warrior, who is protective of his family and clan, known for being loyal and calm
Apparence:A black tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice:Open
Mate:Iceblossom{BC queen;She-cat;RP:Zoe}
Kits:Spiderkit{BC Kit;She-cat;RP:Zoe}, Snowkit{BC kit;Tom;RP:Zoe}, Fallenkit{BC kit;She-cat;RP:Open}, Smokekit{BC kit;Tom;RP:Mitz}
Foster-kits:Mintkit{BC kit;She-cat;RP:Sky}
Parents:A unknown she-cat and an unknown tom
History:Shadowkit was born as the only son of his litter, and as a kit, he was very curious and energetic, considered a bad influence on the other kits in the nursery, especially Icekit. During his apprenticeship, he started trying to learn as much as he could and kept sneaking out of the camp until he was stung by a bee and stayed a moon in the medicine den during which time he became quieter and relaxed, then he developed a friendship with Icepaw and soon both became warriors together. Their friendship became something more and Shadowtail confessed his feelings to Iceblossom, therefore, becoming his mate, and soon both discovered they were expecting kits together.
Likes:Lie down in soft nests, spending time with his kits and mate
Dislikes:Climbing rocks, high places
Fears:Let anything happen to his clan and kin
Strengths:He has good stamina and is very helpful
Weakness:He isn't the best at climbing and can't scent smells very well

Zoe's Characters
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Name: Suntail
Gender: She-cat
Age: 33 Moons
Rank: Queen
Personality: TBRP'D
Appearance: Fluffy orange tabby with green eyes
Mate: Riverfall
Kits: 1st Litter Lionkit, Ashkit, Duskkit, Stripekit
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: Blackthorn
History: Suntail and Blackthorn grew up in Stormclan and enjoyed seeing all the corners of the world in their nomadic tribe. Suntail eventually fell in love with a tom from the clan and they had a litter of kits together; Lionkit, Stripekit, Ashkit and Duskkit. The clan stayed at their previous camp longer than they usally would while they waited for the kits to be old enough to travel long distances. While in that camp a terrible hurricane flooded their camp and the surrouding area in the night and half the clan drowned. Suntail managed to grab Lionkit and swim away depositing him on dry ground before going back. She met her mate halfway and took Duskkit from his grasp and carried him back to Lionkit while her mate went back to try and save their other two kits. Suntail was unable to go back because the water was rising more and she had to get Lionkit and Duskkit away. Unfortunately her mate and other two kits drowned.

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Name: Blackthorn
Gender: Tom
Age: 33 Moons
Rank: Deputy
Personality: TBRP'D
Appearance: Tuxedo
Mate: None Yet
Kits: None Yet
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: Suntail

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Name: Lionkit
Gender: Tom
Age: 3 Moons
Rank: Kit
Personality: TBRP'D
Appearance: Fluffy orange tabby tom with green eyes
Mate: None Yet
Kits: None Yet
Parents: Suntail & Riverfall
Siblings: Duskkit

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Name: Silverflame
Gender: She-cat
Age: 14 moons
Rank: Warrior
Personality: A playful, bouncy, care-free she-cat most of the time, she is not easily provoked unless you mess with someone she loves, then she tends to have quite the temper
Appearance: A long furred, dilute tortoiseshell with greenish yellow eyes
Mate: None yet
Kits: None yet (Note to self so I don't forget lol. Dewkit and Beekit and 2 of her kits names)
Parents: Mousetail (Deceased) Featherflight (Deceased)
Siblings: Honeyflight (Open)


History: Silverflame grew up in Stormclan, moving from place to place. She and Honeyflight enjoyed their kithood, which was full of lots of playing and laughter. During her apprenticeship, she faced more challenges. She isn't the best with anything battle or hunting related and struggled throughout her apprenticeship. The one thing she found was that she loved running, she was good at it and fast, easily beating the other apprentices and even some of the warriors. She found out a bit later that she was also a very strong swimmer. Despite the challenges she was determined to make it through and become a warrior though, and not disappoint her family and so she did. Although it took her a bit longer than her sister she finally received her warrior name at 14 moons old. She has decided that she much prefers a life inside camp though, unless she's running through and exploring whatever territory the clan has chosen to settle in. And the prospect of someday raising kits is very exciting for her. Although she is afraid that her future kits may struggle the same way she did. The thing she wants most out of life is a loving mate and to watch her kits grow up to be successful in whatever they want to do. When the floods came only a moon after she became a warrior she was one of the cats going back to help her clanmates and she has been greatly affected by the fact that she wasn't able to help more of her clan make it out.

Likes: The calm of camp, walks with cats she likes, kits, the colors of the leaves as they begin to fall
Dislikes: Hunting, fighting, rain, being wet
Fears: That the clan will decide she's not good enough and kick her out, that her kits will turn out like her and not succeed
Strengths: Motherly instinct, running, observation, swimming (Even though she hates it, she's one of the best swimmers in the clan)
Weaknesses: Hunting, fighting

Zoe's Characters
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Name: Iceblossom
Gender: She-cat
Age: 23 Moons
Rank: Queen
Personality: Quiet and reserved but has a short temper that never lasts long. Playful and loyal
Appearance: Long-furred white she-cat with ice blue eyes
Mate: Shadowtail
Kits: 1st litter Spiderkit, Snowkit, Fallenkit, Smokekit
Parents: Blazestar and ???
History: She was part of the first litter born into BlazeClan. Her father was Blazestar so she grew up a bit priveleged as many of the original members of BlazeClan adored her father and so treated her the same. She always hated that she often got to eat first, was always sent on the easiest patrols but she mostly hated that she was always being watched. As a result of her easy raising she isn't the best hunter or fighter but she makes a fierce mother and is loyal to a fault.
Likes: Drinking from fresh rain puddles, running and sleeping
Dislikes: Fighting, cats that talk a lot, being watched
Fears: That if she weren't Blazestar's kit she wouldn't be good enough for the clan, water
Strengths: Speed, endurance, speech
Weaknesses: Hunting, fighting
Other:

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Name: Oakleaf
Gender: Tom
Age: 37 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Laid back but stubborn
Appearance: Fluffy brown tom with a white chest and amber eyes
Mate: None Yet
Kits: None Yet
Parents: Unknown

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Name: Spiderkit
Gender: She-cat
Age: 5 Moons
Rank: Kit
Personality: Shy, timid, playful
Appearance: Long furred black she-cat with white paws tail tip and muzzle with blue eyes
Mate: None Yet
Kits: None Yet
Parents: Iceblossom and Shadowtail
Siblings: Snowkit, Fallenkit, Smokekit

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Name: Snowkit
Gender: Tom
Age: 5 moons
Rank: Kit
Personality: Cocky, adventerous
Appearance: White tom wit blue eyes
Mate: None Yet
Kits: None Yet
Parents: Iceblossom and Shadowtail
Siblings: Spiderkit, Fallenkit, Smokekit

Zoe's Characters
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Name: Shadowpaw
Gender: She-cat
Age: 10 Moons
Rank: Apprentice
Personality: TBRP'D
Appearance: Black she-cat with amber eyes
Mate: None Yet
Kits: None Yet
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: Stormpaw & Lakepaw

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Name: Stormpaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 10 Moons
Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Personality: TBRP'D
Appearance: Sand colored tom with amber eyes and a white muzzle
Mate: None yet
Kits: None yet
Parents: Unkown
Siblings: Shadowpaw & Lakepaw

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Name: Petalflame
Gender: She-cat
Age: 29 moons
Rank: Queen
Personality: A stubborn she-cat with a lot of love to give. She has grown to be very guarded and stand-offish due to feeling abandoned and unloved most of her life. If you can get her to open up to you though she is the most loving, sweet, playful cat.
Appearance: Long-furred tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes
Mate: Arcticclaw
Kits: Expecting a litter of 3 kits, OPEN for creation
Parents: Unknown (Earthclan Elders available to adopt through Mitsouri)
Siblings: Duskstrike (Earthcaln Warrior RP:Mitsouri)


History: Petalkit and Duskkit were born to 2 senior warriors in Earthclan. Very soon after they stopped nursing (Around 1 moon old) their mother left the nursery to resume her place as a senior warrior in the clan. Not wanting anything to do with her kits, and their father was much the same way. They spent the rest of their kithood being passed around the other queens in the nursery, never really belonging to anyone. The only constant in their lives was eachother.

As they reached apprentice age, becoming Petalpaw and Duskpaw. Duskpaw excelled in his trainig and quickly rose in station with the clan, soon becoming a well respected warrior by the name of Duskstrike. Petalpaw on the other hand did not get along well with her mentor and resented her clan for allowing her to basically become an orphan. She felt like the clan could care less is she was a part of it or not and only stayed to finsih her training because of Duskpaw. During her training, whenever she was alone outside of camp she would spend her time wandering the territory, and even outside of the territory. This is where she met the rogue who called himself Arctic.

The two became fast friends and she would take any chance she could to go and see him. For the first time in her life she felt like someone other than her brother actually wanted to be with her. Although she struggled she eventually completed her training and recieved her warrior name, Petalflame. And although she now had less oppurtunities to sneak out and see him, her and Arctic continuef to grow closer and closer. Petalfame finally decided to tell Duskstrike about him when they decided to become mates some moons later. And while he wasn't happy he seemed to accept this, until she found out she was expecting kits andArctic asked her to run away with him and leave the clans behind.

As much as Petalflame didn't fell welcome in Earthclan, she knew Duskstrike did. And she couldn't bring herself to leave him. And she had never known any other life, and while her and Duskstrike weren't wanted she wouldn't let that happen to her kits. When she told Arctic her decision to stay with her clan, she brought Duskstrike with her, unsure what his reaction would be. Arctic was furious and blamed Duskstrike, attacking and almost killing him. Petalflame was incredibly upset by this and told him she wouldn't be seeing him anymore before helping her brother back to camp where he recovered.

Since she has moved to the nursery and Duskstrike has been really great about sheilding her from the clans questions about who the father is. But she grieves the loss of her mate and when Duskstrike comes home, reporting a scent or a sighting of Arctic in Goldenclans territory she wonders if he has changed, and trys to dream up ways for them to be together again and raise their kits together.

Likes: Exploring, hunting, Duskstrike
Dislikes: Her parents, Earthclan
Fears: That Earthclan will find out about her affair with a rogue and kick her out, that Duskstrike will abandon her like everyone else has, that her kits will feel unloved and unwanted like she has
Strengths: Hunting, running
Weaknesses: Battle, that she doesn't really like most of her clan
Other:

This is the topic where I will move your approved characters too once you are able to rp with them

This is the topic where I will move your approved characters too once you are able to rp with them

This is the topic where I will move your approved characters too once you are able to rp with them

Spiderkit spotted the rest of the patrol coming out, with Frostpaw at the back. "Come on" she whispered as she crept out if the bush to follow Frostpaw

Sure!

"Look there's Gullpaw!" Spiderkit whispered excitedly

((Let's switch to the forest now))

((Yes, we can switch over to the forest now))

Spiderkit wrinkled her nose, "Eww, no" she protested, "Anyways shhhh, we have to wait for Frostpaw"

"Shhhhhhh" Lionkit shushed them rather loudly, "Look!" he pointed his tail to a shadow in the water a few fox-lengths away. It was getting closer though and he was pretty sure it was a fish.

Duskkit spotted it as well, but it was much closer to Lionkit as he was deeper in the stream. He started to walk closer just as Lionkit decided to pounce at it

Lionkit didn't get anywhere close to the fish and his pounce caused him to lose his balance in the moving water. He struggled to stay above the water for a moment and ended up colliding with Duskkit and knocking him off his feet as well. Lionkit found his footing in time to see Duskkit go under the water, "Duskkit!" he screeched as he jumped after him.

((Good idea))

Duskkit flicked his tail excitedly, "I bet I can catch a fish faster than you!" he told Lionkit as he padded into the shallowest part of the stream.

Lionkit laughed, "No way!" he went out a little farther, a little unsteady in the moving water but managed to keep his balance. Lionkit glanced back at Dovekit, "Dovekit thinks I'll catch one faster!"

Duskkit looked back in shock, "What? No she doesn't, she thinks I will!"

Spiderkit slinked to the entrance and snuck out, she paused just outside the camp and wiggled underneath a bush to hide while she waited for the others.

((Duskkit is going to die soon, has to happen before they reach apprentice age.. Maybe someone has to come find them and he's not doing well?))

Lionkit nodded and took off in the direction of the water, running as fast as his legs would carry him.

Duskkit followed more slowly, trying to not leave Dovekit behind, but he was super excited as well and after a moment began to run after Lionkit.

The pair reached the stream and Lionkit stopped to admire it, his eyes wide with wonder.

Duskkit skidded to a halt and let out a few deep coughs, he shook himself off and looked behind him, "Dovekit?" he called

I'm going to adopt Petalflame :)