Jeremy’s Comments (group member since Jun 09, 2020)

Jeremy’s comments from the Wings of Fire - An Active Roleplaying Group group.

(Anyone on or is this thing dead?)

OK so I'm a huge DnD nerd k? guess what I just rediscovered? CRITICAL. ROLE. All I'm gonna say is watch it.

oh...ok. When do you think you'll get it back?

bow before the dragon emperor.

(Been awhile. Let's continue from Mavi's point of view) Mavi cries after saying those words while Alba simply smiles hugging his Nephew. "Mavi...My brave little soldier...dry your tears." Mavi speaks, his voice almost cracking every other word and sounding as though his vocal cords were damaged. "H-How can I let go....when I'm the reason she's dead?" He said horsely, unsure of what to do in such a dark time.

(till I decide if your in or not consider yourself a temporary member. Meaning your in but your also not.)

(for me in particular, since this is my first time with any kind of power, it might take longer then expected since I don't want to mess this up. i'm sorry.)

(I checked but I don't just say "HEY! Congratz your in!" I need to think on this more carefully.)

(Oh by the way I think it's best if you catch up via reading the comments Modoc. Just be warned there is some tear jerkers in here.)

(Already did. Did you see mine?)

(And that only BARELY scratching the surface.)

Welcome back. Mavi almost died, Aster is morning his dead wife, and both coldfire and Opal are gonna die...oh and we got introduced to Alba, Mavi's version of Uncle Iroh.)

(You and me both. let's call it a night.)

Aster pulling at the heartstrings) Aster begin to walk towards the ocean stopping just at the beaches edge. "I'm sorry for you...you have to learn the truth the hard way." he says as he takes off.

"I wish you no harm. I only came to morn the loss of my wife." He says honestly. "I know you have a heart...so please....let this old man fly back to his injured son." He says with tears. You actually see the grave. It's a head stone with a image of a skywing carved into it as well as those lyrics from the song you heard.

For the first time since he was caged Aster can be his real self & he knows it. "Our child nearly died today...all because he wanted to protect us...This war....if it doesn't kill Mavi then it will most certainly break him...The same with princess Frostbite....they are too kind for this war....But unfortunately....there is nothing we can do....Storm please I beg you...watch over our child....for he needs guidance." Aster says as he gets up but notices Ivy. "A Leafwing.....You must be Ivy. From what Phoenix tells me you are a threat to anyone near you....please spare us....I only came to morn the loss of my wife." he says the tears still streaming down.

They hear singing in the distance as well as crying. As they listen they hear the lyrics. "Leaves from the vine
Falling so slow
Like fragile tiny shells
Drifting in the foam
Little soldier boy
Come marching home
Brave soldier boy
Comes marching home." As they then hear them cry. "It's my fault...please...please forgive me...I know you wouldn't want to see me like this."

Hey Ava....check ot the Icewing place. I've been RPing there and...to be honest a lot of Mavi's character growth seem to be there. I'm warning you, your gonna cry at some moments but others you might go "OH SNAP!" so check it out if you want.

Aster lands in front of a grave. "....Hello....Stormfly.....it's been awhile.....they finally released me...though the chains left a number on my skin...Mavi's fine....a little reckless though he probably get's that from you...." he said holding back the tears. "B-By now Alba probably introduced himself...you know how he is.....I can't believe it's been over twenty years since we met....I-....We miss you.....more then..you'll ever know...." Aster said as tears streamed down his cheeks. Then at that moment father and son cried in unison as they both said. "It's all my fault....please...please forgive me."

Alba looked at Mavi. "Tell me my nephew. What troubles you so?" he said drinking his tea.
"I...I feel....useless.....I couldn't protect the ones I love...I only caused them trouble" Mavi said staring downward. "I try to be as useful as possible....but in the end..."

"You feel you only get in the way...when in actuality you help more then you know." Alba said sipping his tea. "Your failure showed you in another light. You are not a porcelain dragon without any cracks in your scales. No rather you are a mirror with many cracks, and those cracks make you more relatable." Alba sip his tea once more. "You are like me nephew. You do not wish to fight, and like me you'll learn a leason that I learned the hard way." he said with a laugh.

"But...A leader-"

"Leads in many ways my child." Alba said cutting Mavi off. "You try to lead the way my brother does. By example, a show of power. What you must do is find how you lead and not lead the ways other before you did." Alba said putting his cup down. "I feel the conflict within you Mavi...you fear more then just failure...you fear loosing them...don't you?" Alba said looking at Mavi. Mavi was shocked beyond all belief.

"How did yo-"

"How do I know?" Alba said cutting Mavi off again. "Because your father was the same when he started as a soldier. Weak, afraid, but most importantly...fragile. He won't admit it but when he heard the news of your mothers death.....he broke into a thousand shards...but over time..he accepted her passing, he learned to LET. GO." alba said with a honest heart. "And now...so must you. Let go of your hatred, your anger, your sadness...." Alba touches Mavis chest. "Your pain...Mavi, my brave little soldier, You must learn to forgive yourself for something you can't control." Alba said staring into Mavi's eyes.