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148 pages, Paperback
First published November 1, 2010
“Do you think this hash is coated with opium, Basil?”
Basil Bunting took his lunch break upstairs in the Rose and Crown where he grumbled about having to proof stocks and shares all morning for the local rag while his eyes were thickening with cataracts. He took the handful of quid deals of the “black Packi” hashish that I was selling around the pubs and held one to his nose and sniffed it, then shook his head in discouragement, and suggested that I was taking too many risks for too small a reward.
The two officials sat at an empty table and I was instructed to sit opposite. They studied me carefully as they loaded various files onto the desk between us. The senior officer opened an envelope and took out my slim month-at-a-glance diary for 1976 that had been removed in the raid.
“We’ve been following your career with great interest.” He folded open the month of August.
“Are you a socialist?”
“I hope so. Why?”
“It says here ‘Picket South Africa House.’ Did you organize the picket line?”
“No.”
“What do you write poems about?”
“You didn’t bring me here for a tutorial.”
“You’ve really disappointed me. I used to be a fan of yours,” said the Geordie arresting officer.
One week later Lindsay Anderson lent me the money to buy an airline ticket to Warsaw and we flew there together—he to show his films and lecture and I to meet the woman who had waited a year for my return. We cleared customs and immigration control and once out into the airport, a short taxi ride from my lover and a long way from a year of sweated fear, I took a deep breath, opened my arms and said, with a touch of irony, “Ah, freedom.”
“Dear boy,” Lindsay chided, “you never know who’s listening.”
My Daughter’s Heart
my daughter’s heart beats against me
gulls fly up river
white factory smoke flows east
still winter trees
grateful for the crows rough caw
so many sea birds circle the river
slow goods-train
movement in the still trees
stray thought starling
co-ordination of all things
in a moment
I SUGGEST
1. Compose aloud; poetry is a sound.
2. Vary rhythm enough to stir the emotion you want but not so as to lose impetus.
3. Use spoken words and syntax.
4. Fear adjectives; they bleed nouns. Hate the passive.
5. Jettison ornament gaily but keep shape
Put your poem away till you forget it, then:
6. Cut out every word you dare.
7. Do it again a week later, and again.
Never explain - your reader is as smart as you.