Sex Stalker

Sex Stalker #1

by Darren G. Burton

Ryan's life is dull and boring. That is, until the mysterious M comes along. Ryan's life goes from mundane to exciting when a secret admirer starts leaving messages on his car and sending him lewd emails. She calls him for phone sex with the promise of meeting in the flesh. Will Ryan finally meet the mysterious M and discover her true identity? And what does she have in store for him?

Genres: Erotica, Romance, Contemporary, Fiction, Short Stories, Erotic Romance, Ebooks

54 pages, Nook

First published August 23, 2010

About the author

Born in Sydney, Australia, and now living on the Gold Coast, I have been writing for more than 30 years. I've written numerous full length and short works of fiction and non-fiction, and have had many articles and short stories published in major Australian and international publications.

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Reviews

[Book Dragon · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is a short story that didn't do much for me. The idea was ok but the following was average. It seemed like average man fantasy.

[Charles · Rating 3 out of 5]

This one was free on Kindle when I got it. I was curious about the erotica stuff they're presenting there so thought I'd give a couple of 'em a try. First, this is really a longish short story rather than a book, but that's OK. I think this kind of story works best at that length. The prose itself is well written. The title tells you exactly what this story is about. A man discovers he has a stalker who likes to talk dirty to him and eventually wants to meet him. There is a fair amount of sex, as you might expect, and there's a mystery left at the end, which may or may not persuade me to get the second book: Sex Stalker 2.

[Jerry · Rating 4 out of 5]

Who would think that phone sex and sex with someone that you have never met and have no idea who they are could be so hot!! Well, after reading this short story you will. It has me wondering, who is M? That is how the story closes. I hope to one day discover, with Ryan, who M is.

This story starts out hot and keeps you that way during the whole book. The physical sex takes place only within the last 20% of the book. Oh but what I journey getting there.

[Bob Himes · Rating 3 out of 5]

Undercover Lover

Ryan starts getting suggestive notes and messages, all simply signed "M". Who is this mysterious stalker and what happens when they finally meet?

[Kelsy Kasey · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars

Sexy little short and a relatively good start to a series. It left me wanting to know more so that's a plus.

A little detail heavy in the beginning as far as everything Ryan was doing from the time he left work. Not necessarily a bad thing, but I kind of felt that less would've been more.

I like the premise behind the story and I'm sure I'll be reading the next one. Other than what's mentioned above, I had two little niggles with it.

1 - The word 'juices' being used a couple of times is fine, but as many times as it was used here kind of took away from the sexiness of the story. Personally, I don't find the word sexy in my erotica but that's me.

2 -Ouch on the lack of preparation during the anal sex. HOT!!! to read, but ouch! :)


The story was sexy enough. It kind of went from zero to ninety quick and that's pretty much what I want in my erotica. And like I said, I ended it wanting more. There's a hot phone sex scene that deserves a mention.

I'm really not getting some of the bad reviews on here. I read a couple where the people weren't fans of erotica but they downloaded an erotica book. Then they felt the need to post reviews saying they don't like erotica but they knowingly downloaded and read an erotica book. Therefore, bad rating.

What the fuck?

As an erotica author, that's a pet peeve of mine, so pardon my bitching. :)

I'm curious to see what happens next with Ryan and M.

[Ronnae Stately · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ryan was a boring financier who could really do for a good night of fun. One night leaving his office he finds a piece of paper on his car window telling him he was sexy. When he gets home he finds a note telling him that someone wants to suck his cock. Then he gets a message on facebook telling him that they can’t wait to meet and do it for real. The next day he gets a phone call from mystery woman and they have some hot phone sex. This short story ends with a fete a complete in a hotel room where Ryan gets his nut and the woman gets hers but he still doesn’t know who she is. Can’t wait to see what the sequel to this story tells.

[GetBooked101 · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 stars

A decent quick erotic short with a decent story and great description.

Pros
Short erotica
Great description
Great love making scene
Cons
I didn't enjoy the phone s@x scene
Not a fan of them doing it on a tomb that's a tad bit too kinky for my liking

[Gareth Williams · Rating 2 out of 5]

Intriguing

Fast pace knowledge which is stairwell written.
It is long enough to give the reader a fast of what is to come in the sequel.

[Karen N Strauss · Rating 3 out of 5]

Too short!

[Ranjana · Rating 1 out of 5]

A rather naughty short story that is highly unrealistic. Typical male fantasy.

[Leonara Golosa · Rating 2 out of 5]

I don't think there are actual spoilers in this review. In my opinion there is nothing to spoil.

Our hero, the middle-aged Beemer-driver Ryan, has a very mundane, boring, dull. and horny life. Suddenly, for no apparent reason, a secret admirer begins enticing him with a note on his car. He's getting a little excited. Then the admirer starts sending him sexually exciting emails. More excitement. Soon there's phone sex. Orgasm! They meet in a darkened hotel room. Orgasms ensue. End of book; buy another volume and maybe discover the admirer's identity. Maybe not. Dial "M" for Mother?

Not particularly satisfying, no character development. Covers snippets from about three days of our hero's life and a few hours of the admirer's.

[Lady Raven RAVE! · Rating 4 out of 5]

I loveeeeeeeeeeee this really quickie short story but before I get into anything I was set on giving this book 5 STARS till I get to the end and that 1 star fell off, I don't want to spoil the end but REALLY! The book left you wanting more but the author which is a guy, I have never read an erotica from a guy before I think but well done, but I didn't like the end. This book kept you on your toes, the build up was great for me the whole secret admire thing was a turn on but also creepy at the same time. The book is about Ryan with his routine line he was bored and wanted excitement until he gets a note from a secret admire and it took off from that moment. I have never read a phone sex as describe in this book. Make sure your into that hardcore, dirty talk and messy sex read if not you so should not read this book.


PS: was recently told it had a part 2 hence the ending.



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[Yianna Yiannacou · Rating 2 out of 5]

This free short story just didn’t do it for me. I found it rather awkward actually and it shows that guys think more with their lower head than the one on top of their shoulders. It was written well enough, but I think the author could have done a little bit more with it. If there was a second book, I would understand. But there isn’t, so I just don’t know what to think.

Ryan, a single man, divorced twice, is lacking some love in his life. That is until he finds a note on his car, receives a Facebook message and a creepy phone call from some random girl named ‘M.’ They end up having phone sex. I can’t imagine what kind of guy would do that with someone he doesn’t even know. Then he decides to meet up with her and have sex in a pitch black room. I shook my head when the guy showed up to the sleazy motel. I thought this was going to be a good erotica gone bad. Sort of like a praying mantis taking off her mates head while they have sex. But that didn’t happen. I think the book would have been better if that happened – just saying.

This story is basically phone sex, then crappy real sex. Would I recommend you ask? No. That’s all.

[Arlyn · Rating 4 out of 5]

I see that the average rating for this book is not as high as mine. I enjoy reading fictional erotica that takes me out of my comfort zone a bit. I have a happy and satisfying life with my husband and certainly have no desire to revisit the lonely and depressing years I lived through as a single woman. The one thing I did enjoy when I was single was the allure of the unknown, anticipation and build up of tension on a first date or going out with my friends in hopes of meeting someone. The possibilities were limitless. I've had my share of secret admirers and even a stalker or two. The secret admirers were a lot of fun to ponder but were ultimately disappointing when the mystery men were revealed. The stalkers were creepy and unsettling. Then again, I was never stalked by the likes of Brad Pitt...If that were the case, I'd have enjoyed the stalkers for their sheer passion and creative enthusiasm. That, and a lingering fantasy of mine about anonymous sex, made this book work for me. I can live vicariously through the characters and their risky behavior without having to leave the comfort and safety of my own home...

[Bookend Adventures]

I unfortunately downloaded this for my Kindle and after reading it...I'm going to delete it. I didn't like it...at all. I mean, yes I should have been clued in to the whole Sex Stalker thing, but hey, I figured it was like a couple's fantasy to play or something. But to actually have sex with the woman...not even knowing who the hell she is.

Okay, so there have been stories I've read where two people have a quickie and they don't know each other, but this. The woman was a stalker! For all he knew, she could have had a 300 pound idiot as her sidekick and at the ready to kill or hurt him. Honestly.

And then the fact that he went back and forth between fucking her ass and vagina. Totally unsanitary. Everyone should know that if you're going to take a girl by her ass, that you need to change the condom before going back to her vagina. This dude just went back and forth, back and forth.

If she caught something from doing that, and him too, I wouldn't have been surprised.

Just, don't bother. I'm ashamed to say I read it.

[Sarah · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fantastic concept for a story, but lacking in length. Just getting into the story and then it's over. Wonderful sex scenes, well written. Some good humour in the content made this an enjoyable read. For such a short story the author made it easy to get to know the main character. Ryan, 43 single , been married & divorced twice and his life was currently boring.

This soon changes when M comes into his life. Neither us nor Ryan know who M is, but that doesn't stop him from living on the wild side for a while. Mystery, texts, letters, internet, phone sex & meeting for a wild night. Like I said a lot happens in a short space of time.

Need to read the next parts, we were left hanging not knowing too much, but excited about what we did know.

[BookAddict ✒ La Crimson Femme · Rating 2 out of 5]

A 2.5 story for me. I enjoyed it and rated it only 2.5 because it isn't something I'll be remembering after a month.

First, the story is well written. There is a beginning, middle and end. There is a bit of a cliffhanger with the mysterious secret admirable. The plot is pretty simple with a causal hook up.

Second, the sex is decent. It's a hot little fantasy for those into phone sex and a bit of sex with strangers. I'm a bit jaded with sex so for me, it didn't do much. Although, the anal sex was a nice addition.

Recommended for erotic readers looking for a little "something something" for foreplay.

[Sassafrass · Rating 4 out of 5]

I thought this was good. only a few editing mistakes, which I can't say for all of the ebooks I get--not even the paid ones. It was such a great tease to be so close but yet so far to find out who the mysterious Miss M is.

But how hot is it to have your phone sex fantasy come true? I'm sure that's on more than a few men's fantasy lists.

I'm looking forward to reading to part two. I hope Ryan finds out who his admirer finally is!

[Frances McNeal · Rating 2 out of 5]

It had the potential of being a really romantic and erotic story in my opinion. I loved the mystery of who was the stalker and the hotel scene was hot and then it was over. I wasn't sure if this was just a guy fantasy or if this could actually turn into something more. I'd love to know more if there is a follow up book. I like the writing, it was short and sweet and hot, but no HEA which is what I like to read in a book.

[Cathy]

This was a free Kindle download. In addition to the usual copyright notice at the beginning of this short story the author has included a note that he claims the moral right to list his name as author.

Nothing about this is moral and I wouldn't be so proud to have written it.

Ok, the title says a lot but, heck, it was free. This is nothing more than the author's excuse to write a sex fantasy. Don't bother downloading. It's not worth the battery energy.

[Lesa Divine · Rating 3 out of 5]

If you looking for something quick, kinky and to the point I have to say this is it. Overall very exciting with the sex scenes starting off with Ryan leading a boring life, but it's spice up by a mystery woman by the name of M. That leaving him a note on his car, mail in his mailbox and messages on Facebook then here comes the call that leads to naughty things on the phone. Finally able to full fill his fantasy he still don't know who is M.

Kinky and to the point.

[Iraida · Rating 3 out of 5]

this goes to show that guys really do think with their dicks. A girl stalks him and he doesn't give it more than a few passing worrisome thoughts before he is over come with arousal. That's just kind of sad when you think about it. She could be a serial killer for all he know and he stills agree to meet with her in a motel as long as the promise of sex was made.

Other than that, it was a quirky read. I wouldn't pay to read the sequel but if I come across it free I won't shy away from it.

[LadyH95 · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed this book - well, short story. There was a good level of steam, the main character was interesting and the intrigue of "who is 'M'" makes me almost want to get the next story.... almost. I wasn't that drawn in due to the short length of the story, so I probably will end the series with this one.

[Jeannie · Rating 2 out of 5]

A short little erotica that actually has a full plot-line with a few twists. While "Sex Stalker" is one of the better-concocted pieces of free erotica that I have found on Amazon, thus far, I still find the plot to be cliche. This is your basic 'sexy secret admirer' piece - nothing new or earth-shattering here.

[Mollie *scoutrmom* · Rating 1 out of 5]

I thought this might be OK, but it was pure pornography. Excellently written descriptions of feelings and actions with no plot, no character development, and a TSTL hero who is lucky to have emerged alive from the hotel room. Not my thing, but if it's yours, it is very well done.

[Jim son of Jim (formerly PhotoJim) · Rating 3 out of 5]

Well, incredibly short and unfinished. Nothing wrong with the story except for the lack of completion. It's like the opening chapters to a book. Would be so much better if we were given some sort of resolution.

[Book Slut · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was a freebie from Kindle ... and it was a good thing. The descriptions were quite crass and I ended up skimming through to find out who M was. Yeah, you don't get the answer to that big mystery is this story.

Can someone just tell me who she was, please?

[Laura's Book Addiction · Rating 2 out of 5]

I really don't know what to say the story line was hardley there it was just alot of sex talk and sex action. I really really wanted more of a story line and I wanted to find out who M is. But to find out you have to read book two agrrhhhhhh.

[Shonnie · Rating 2 out of 5]

Now I know this is fiction however it was too much for me (meaning, it was too unbelievable). My main question was who and why? Or maybe my question should be why would you (hero) instead of who (heroine).

[°☆.。.:*・Nanna°☆.。.:*・ · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was a pretty good short story. I think that it was the right length and the end left me wanting more. I loved those hot and sexy scenes between the two characters and can't wait for Ryan to find out who M is. Looking forward to the next book.