KNOW THYSELF was written by Jared Aragona and has a fatasyesque mythology, but a contemporary world, amongst a greater sci-fi universe. And, as that description suggests, it's got a little too much going on in the world-building sense, while it has very little going on in character development. No character quirks... nothing that would make either of the two primary characters seem real or complex. However, it was the gimmicky use of second person that really killed this story for me. Having our narrator constantly going back to Luzciel, writing in second person to her was jarring and irritating. Additionally, the story could easily have been told in a straight-forward manner that wasn't so forced.