2.6
It wasn't bad exactly.. Mostly just.. meh.
I know there's supposed to be a "supernatural cupid" but that whole concept is just so underdeveloped and barely used, it makes no sense, and it fits very ill with the rest of the story who isn't supernatural at all.
So their whole fast developing connection doesn't feel very natural or earned. I've read tons of kidnapping stories where you actually buy the whole Stockholm syndrome thing, and you can feel the sparks and the tension between the characters. Here it mostly just felt forced and fake.
And once their "connection" was made, their whole dynamic is weird. In these kind of stories, you kind of want the top to be all confident Alpha and badass, but he is none of those things. He isn't weak either, but he's just a regular guy.
Its very hard to understand what the bottom sees in him. Usually its security, because it's clear he's someone who can handle themselves and take care of you, but he doesn't fit that mould. Also he is barely described, so you almost don't know what he looks like, and the bottom never comments on his hotness, so no sexual tension is built that way either.
And I suppose you could argue that it's brave to try a new thing, but the thing is, that's not what you want in a story like this. When you read a kidnapping story, you want a badass rock you can lean on so you feel safe, someone who orders you around a little so you can settle.
Even if he pretends to be that for a short while, that's not who he is, and their whole dynamic just feels off. There's no power exchange at all, and I mostly just feel robbed, because that's what you want out of a story like this.
And all of a sudden from like one scene to the next, they go from kidnapping victim to boyfriends, and it's way too fast, and absolutely unearned.
And after that its mostly just.. Boring, honestly. And I was so deeply disappointed by their first sex scene?!
It starts while the top is asleep, so you miss the beginning of it, and any possible build-up. And then when he wakes up, he is bound and being ridden, and that's the whole scene. It's just so underwhelming and boring. I was hoping for something way hotter.
The shower scene in the beginning showed potential, as did the cock warning scene in the car, but then it was just kind of over, and it feels like they skipped over something that could have been delicious, and just fast forwarded over it?! What a disappointment.
In the end I just lost interest.
But at least it wasn't badly written if that makes sense, even if the plot wasn't very hot or interesting.
DNF