This ended up feeling like a quirky "small town" book as it was largely focused on a less-known planet that does not get dragged into intergalactic politics, as is often the case in these books. And this is both the best thing about this title and maybe one of its weak points as well.
On the plus side, it's a very focused adventure that really keeps you closely tied to our protagonist characters and gives them time to grow. On the other hand, it means we have a very finite mix of BattleMechs involved in all the combat and moments when it feels like things aren't progressing all that quickly precisely because we don't exactly have a lot of Mechs to burn through.
But hey, it's a solid adventure of a new MechWarrior rising up the ranks, getting involved in a weird little civil war of sorts on their planet that somewhat mirrored the conflict between Victor Steiner-Davion and his sister but still kept things very close to home.