I paid for this, an unknown author to me, as the premise sucked me in. However, it took me a few days to plough through it. It began well but then I seemed to find it a little harder to get back into. There were too many mistakes, which always gets my back up, anyway. Then a great deal seemed way too farfetched for my liking, which made parts unbelievable to me which spoilt it.
Some chapters took us back in time to before Tina died but he didn't label those chapters so just launched into it which was strange. I wondered for ages how old Claire was and we didn't find out till we were 34% in. The name of Captain Emmerso caught my eye all the time as I kept "seeing" Emmerson so it looked like a mistake each time I read it.
He wrote tick not tic, there are apostrophe mistakes (which NO author seems to manage to get right in the digital format), then at one point I was furious when he wrote that Ms Maynard joined the principal.....when Ms Maynard WAS the principal !! Sloppy in the extreme and should've been picked up. Please was written, not pleased, pent breath when it's usually pent-up breath, capitalised Forensics at times then didn't, we had hangars not hangers, then Jed changed his name to Jede once !!
I've never seen anyone write 1am as one AM before, either. Neither is there too much imagination naming his characters, as we had a Claire Wolfe along with a Justin Fox, then an FBI agent, Tom Brown, wore brown (!!) I didn't believe for one minute that a homicide detective wouldn't know what 'unsub' meant, either, I'm afraid.
I did stick with it till the end but was pretty disappointed overall.