So. Much. Sex.
So much that this book got itself a Smut-By-Volume of 69.69%. Did I add precisely 1,168 words of smut to the epilogue just to bring it up from 69.37% to that number? Ummmm…what do you think? I don't pretend I'm not immature as hell lol. But when you reach the 70,000s for words of smut in a book I feel like what's another 1,168 between friends?
I stand by what I said in the dedication, though, major shifts are made in the plot through the smut. I also really, really love the "I love you" in this book. I think it rivals the one between the guys in the first book for me.
Sorry not sorry about the cliffhanger. I always knew the second book in the trilogy would end after that happened, but I didn't expect to basically leave it right there. I figured I wasn't exploring what happened any further in this book, so making it part of the sneak peek made sense instead of having it as where the book ends. That's why I've been warning everyone who asked if book one had a cliffhanger that book two definitely would.
Pool cues. That's all for this paragraph.
I apologise in advance for book three, because I'm about a thousand percent sure I won't be able to keep up this breakneck level of smut writing in the final book. I just can't. I'll need more plot words to tie up the trilogy properly. This book hovered between 69-72% smut for the last few chapters, dropping down and going higher again depending on how much plot was in the chapter. I'll do my best to keep book three above fifty percent, but I probably shouldn't make any promises.
Either way, it'll definitely still be smutty, but I think 69.69% is the smuttiest book I'll ever manage to write. It's surprisingly hard to write a coherent book while including that much sex. I joked that I'm running out of sex scene ideas by the end because I haven't repeated one yet, but I still have a couple of things up my sleeve for the final book.
Which reminds me that I think I might have written a unique sex scene for a reverse harem in this book? The one at the end of chapter five. If you've read that in another reverse harem, let me know! I've asked a few avid RH readers and even one who's read over 300 of them said she'd never come across it. Not gonna lie, I felt like the Queen of Smut that day! 🤣
I honestly thought it would be more common in the reverse harem genre and didn't think twice about writing it. It was only when I sent the chapter to my alphas, and they were like, "Whoa. Did not see that coming!" that I started to question if I'd actually managed to write a unique sex scene in a genre full of literally millions of them.
I'm sure it exists in books out there and there is a specific kink where I expect it's in a lot of books, but it wasn't done in that way. To me, it made sense to happen the way it did because he wanted to be sure how she'd react. I know I'm being annoying and talking around it, but even marking this review as a spoiler, I don't want to fully spoil it. If you know you know, and if you don't know, you can go read chapters three to five to understand it. It's important to note that reading chapter five out of context won't give you a full understanding of why it happened the way it happened.
Am I writing straight erotica in this book? Perhaps. I have no regrets. It's hot as shit and you all know what you're getting into. Honestly, if I could be one character in any book, it would be Lexi in this one. 🤤🥵
That's all she wrote…I'm going to go now and start book three off with a bang. 😉