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115 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 1984
The first day there could be nothing, but Rex still went to look. On foot and without an umbrella, even though it was raining softly.Passages like the above, which for me lacked flow, were one of the chief culprits responsible for my viewing this as a fairly tepid “like.”
‘The local color changes to red everytime we get there, ‘ Rex had thought, but to his own surprise he hand’t said it. But it was hot and far, and during the last hour the mood had become a little testy.There’s nothing really wrong with the above, but my eyes didn’t slide across the page...they kept hitting speed bumps and something felt a bit off. This may just be me, so if you see nothing troubling about either of the two quotes I’ve included so far, you may have less of an issue than me.
"Dan werd ze nu verkracht. En daarna? Ze kon vermoord worden. Dan werd haar lijk vroeger of later teruggevonden. Maar ze zou niet zo stom zijn zich te verzetten. De kans was groot dat ze ergens op een afgelegen plek werd achtergelaten, dan zou ze na verloop van tijd het hotel weten te bereiken. Al met al was dat het meest waarschijnlijk. Het was niet eens gezegd dat de vakantie reddeloos was."