Seducing Her Fake Husband: African American Erotic Short Story

by Kinky Karibbean, Kimolisa Mings

Now Kristina's ' husband ' is standing in the middle of her living room asking her to do the unthinkable. This wasn't part of the arrangement.

But it is the only way to ensure that he remains in the country.

And what starts out as payback has turned into seduction .

One-Click now to bite into this bite size erotica.

Genres: Erotica

46 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 29, 2015

Reviews

[John Della · Rating 3 out of 5]

Without a doubt, the book (or rather, the short story) is a good and quick read. It’s well-written, the sentences fit together, and everything “flows.” The whole story starts in an immigration office where a woman and a man formalize their marriage, which is supposed to guarantee the man citizenship. And that’s it, and then sex. That’s the whole story. And it’s not bad, it’s just too short. Once again, I was fooled by the “volume” of the book presented on Amazon, as one-third of it is “ads and free chapters” of other books. In such moments, I feel cheated because I expect the story to develop, for there to be actions that are not sex, but no, the book ends, and two-thirds of it onwards is just advertising. Well, maybe it works, maybe those with Kindle Unlimited don’t mind, but I, who had to pay a dollar for it, feel cheated.

The naturalness of events – just okay, they decided on sex rather quickly and for reasons that are not very convincing. I won’t divulge what those reasons are, but they could be seen as unbelievable or amusing.
The fluidity of the story – the book is so short that it’s hard to put down ;). However, I admit it was a good read.
Erotic scenes – quite successful, spicy without crossing the line of good taste. But, can’t the characters be imagined differently than just with a tight slit and a large member? Huh?
Compassion towards the character – without any chance. This short piece had more sex packed into it than character development, which is a pity.
Authenticity of characters – yes and no. Neither does the woman come off as someone so in need of money that she decides on a sham marriage, nor is the man with some past described as “sexually inexperienced.”
Overall impression of the book – it’s good. The most significant flaw is dedicating more space to the sex lives of the characters than to the characters themselves. However, it was a nice and enjoyable read.
Whether I highlighted a quote that I liked – I didn’t find one.
The book is quick, fluid, and quite well-written. It’s a pity it’s short and lacks in plot.

[SELENE LAKE · Rating 3 out of 5]

I like me some down and dirty, but I also need character development and a story.

This novella just didn't reel me in. Nor did it keep me interested in the characters.
Fact is, I read it a couple days ago and can't remember their names. :(

I think a 3 star review is fair, seeing that more readers in this genre will like or even love it.

Note there are some editing issues that could make the reading smoother.

[Denise Newman · Rating 5 out of 5]

loved it

If you like erotic stories, then you are going to love the short erotic story. Seducing her fake husband was a great read, Troy and Kristina’s story was everything I wanted and needed in an erotic in under 100 pages.

I definitely recommend reading this book to anyone looking for a short erotic story!

[Wyldchild · Rating 5 out of 5]

Spicy Read

A few typos but great flow of events and detailed description. Not an implausible situation but rather a believable one as we all know once the line is crossed there's no going back

[Yolanda Abner · Rating 3 out of 5]

Nice Short Story

Good story line but lots of grammatical errors which at times made it hard to follow. Overall book was an ok read.

[Sandra G. Coffey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Really Good

For a short story, it was well written, quick and to the point. I enjoyed it; looking forward to others.

[Brenda · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book gave me what I asked for. It was a short, sexy read 📚.

[Juliet Renee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved it 🤍

I didn’t want it to end lol. The author did a great job I think they need a book to tell the whole story.

[andreasbooktea · Rating 5 out of 5]

Short and sweet

Yeah this wats cute. I did go in blind so I didn’t have any prior thought on the book so I really erotic novella!

[Faina Lacroix Rucker · Rating 2 out of 5]

I could’ve enjoyed the novella for what it was but the grammatical errors kept taking me out of the story.

[Ms.LeKisha Renee' London · Rating 3 out of 5]

Just too short

Need more of the story or a be sequel. It was a good read, but needed more. It just wasn't enough.

[Cynthia]

Very HOT!

I really enjoyed reading this short story. Ot held my attention from beginning to end . I look forward to reading more.