Riven Adams is strong minded, confident, loving, and fierce. Everything a Luna should be. Zaden King is strong, dangerous, and ruthless. Everything an Alpha should be.
I really enjoyed this story and it was getting increasingly better and fleshed out. A couple of weeks ago and some 60 chapters later I had to stop. There was no end in sight (this book was still being written), the chapters got shorter*, the prices on the app stayed the same. I actually payed more for these chapters than for a thick hard cover book.
I would have loved to continue on. Maybe one day the author can publish a real book or kindle version. I sure hope so.
*i am not blaming the author. There was some personal stuff going on in her life so she didn’t have enough time and strength to work on chapter length. She did apologize several times.
Ps: those reading apps are a scam. Really expensive considering that a lot off books have 60+ chapters and you have to buy them separately, as they are still being written.
Amazing, although grammar can be improved this book is just a spectacle to behold and it's storytelling will never leave you bored rather it makes you eager to know what happens next hope there is a sequel in the making
It started off with a lot of promise… Riven was strong minded and a badass but then she turned whinny and weak. She then continued to switch between badass and weak throughout the story. The plot jumped everywhere but finally came back to the main story. There were so many characters that it was hard to keep track of them all and I feel like the author struggled with that a little too. Overall, it had some very funny and entertaining parts but also some very frustrating parts.
Read this book on bravo app.. was really enjoying it but it ended very abruptly.. I'm not actually sure it was the end.. the spelling and grammar are not great but the actual story is great and I'd love for someone to tell me if the ending was indeed abrupt or if there was an actual ending
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