1.29 Meh stars. The concept was good, but everything else like characterization, dialogue, plot...sucked.
The chapters never seemed to end on a climax or a big reveal so it felt like there was nothing plot-wise moving the story along. I thought the whole "grandpa hates the pack" thing would've been leveraged more, but that ending was a bit of a wild curve ball. And not like a "wow, I didn't see that coming", but more like a "wow, that was set up very last minute..."
“She [Embry] yanked the curtain back, scaring the hell out of me. “Because you’ve only been here a couple days. It will get easier to adjust as time goes by.”
“And if I don’t?” I asked, watching her face closely.”
I get tired of "heroines" like this. They are senselessly fighting against the forces that are dragging them into a new world or area of thought. Instead, why not ask better questions or actually try to leave instead of blowing smoke all the time?
Cait's whole argument to not embrace her circumstances was she wanted her iNdEpEnDeNcE when no one was forcing her to do anything to begin with. And every time Embry countered her argument with facts or observations, Cait always copped out with "It’s just been a long few days." and she always wrote off the relationship with Roman like, "...I didn’t know what was real or fabricated."
Am I to really believe this is a girl who has traveled the world?
"Taking the nanny gig here was something I had done on a whim in hopes of finding myself again after having spent the last couple of years traveling around the world without a plan."
How is it that this girl can cross international borders on a whim, but she can't embrace a new culture (wolf pack)? As the kids would say today: that's cap.
I wish we would've actually been able to learn more about the wolf culture in this book through experience and not just Roman/Embry spouting something off. It felt like she hid from the pack in the cabin all the time. HOW BORING! And she was scared to see someone shift? She's such a lame main character because she doesn't DO ANYTHING!
I think there is something incomplete with the character-building in this book because you don't have someone as obtuse and close-minded as Cait plopped into a brand new world like this, who met her "best friend" online, not be open to a little bit of the peculiar. It just doesn't fit.
"Roman, I can’t be your mate. My mind and heart don’t work like yours. I’m not okay with having my future chosen for me."
oH pULEASE..give me a break...somebody call the WAH-bulance. Stupid.
"Clean break, Cait. I’m an all-in kind of person. I would have given you all the time you needed, but you made your point clear. We are not going to be mates. The pull we have will fade over time, and that will be that. I’ll keep my distance to make things easier for you, and I ask that you do the same for me."
^This is a true man. He's honest, makes a decision, executes it, and doesn't let some indecisive, hot-then-cold female continue to mess with his emotions. Roman deserves better than Cait. I don't care what kind of SuPeRnAtUrAl energy she's got. She's boring, has lame arguments, and her newly formed powers are the ONLY thing interesting about her.
I could say a lot more, but I think I'll leave it at that. Needless to say I won't be continuing the series. Onto the next book!