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The Light Wings Epic #1
Dutybound
- Finalist, 2021 Ozma Book Award for Fantasy Fiction (CIBA)
As long as there is Light, there is hope!
When young Lucia Sannon, High Maiden of Moz, receives a gift from her long-lost father her whole world changes. Lucia and the other heirs of nobility are forced to face the Sins of their forefathers and bring their world from the brink of Darkness. With the help of the Light Wings and its power, Lucia must heed the call to assemble the Light's Virtues and lead them into battle against the very Sins that seek to destroy their world. But finding the four Virtues will not be easy, for much of the knowledge is lost and the understanding of one's own morality is the only key to unlocking the power each of them holds within.
A story of faith and morality, Dutybound: Light Wings Volume 1 will lead you through a journey of self-discovery as our heroes face conflict from outside and within themselves. Duty, desire, envy, hope, hate, love, pride, and temperance all are challenged within this series in an epic tale that is sure to have you pondering your own true nature.
As long as there is Light, there is hope!
When young Lucia Sannon, High Maiden of Moz, receives a gift from her long-lost father her whole world changes. Lucia and the other heirs of nobility are forced to face the Sins of their forefathers and bring their world from the brink of Darkness. With the help of the Light Wings and its power, Lucia must heed the call to assemble the Light's Virtues and lead them into battle against the very Sins that seek to destroy their world. But finding the four Virtues will not be easy, for much of the knowledge is lost and the understanding of one's own morality is the only key to unlocking the power each of them holds within.
A story of faith and morality, Dutybound: Light Wings Volume 1 will lead you through a journey of self-discovery as our heroes face conflict from outside and within themselves. Duty, desire, envy, hope, hate, love, pride, and temperance all are challenged within this series in an epic tale that is sure to have you pondering your own true nature.
- GenresFantasy
358 pages, Paperback
First published June 22, 2021
About the author
Mark Aaron Alvarez II
1 book80 followersHi, I'm Mark! I'm a fantasy writer, poet, and marketer from Houston, Texas. My debut novel, Dutybound: Light Wings Epic Vol. 1 was released on June 22nd, 2021. Its sequel Bloodbound is currently in development.
My main muses for writing are music and video games, although I started studying the works of Poe, London, and Shakespeare around age 8. Writing has proven to be the best way for me to express my philosophical nature, tied to a dark past and troubled upbringing. I like to write dark fantasy mainly, with themes revolving around faith and morality. My poetry for the most part is faith-based, stemming from my upbringing in the church and my survival of a gunshot at the age of 4. I firmly believe we all exist for a purpose beyond our understanding. I write to explore this sentiment because even though our world might seem to be dark and corrupted at times, writing tends to remind me that the source of one's light always comes from within.
My main muses for writing are music and video games, although I started studying the works of Poe, London, and Shakespeare around age 8. Writing has proven to be the best way for me to express my philosophical nature, tied to a dark past and troubled upbringing. I like to write dark fantasy mainly, with themes revolving around faith and morality. My poetry for the most part is faith-based, stemming from my upbringing in the church and my survival of a gunshot at the age of 4. I firmly believe we all exist for a purpose beyond our understanding. I write to explore this sentiment because even though our world might seem to be dark and corrupted at times, writing tends to remind me that the source of one's light always comes from within.
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July 3, 2021
I thought this was a very good story. The world was interesting as well as the magic included. I really liked what the author did with the idea of Light vs Dark.
At first, I had a hard time getting into it. Something just didn’t really click with me when it came to this one. But I did end up enjoying it overall. The second half of the book really picked up, and I enjoyed it.
There was a fair amount of world buildings, which I enjoyed and found interesting. There’s also a very heavy religious aspect to this story. The main character’s faith is a big part of her journey. I found that interesting and enjoyed seeing it play out. It had a unique magic system that I hadn’t seen much.
I thought it was all very unique compared to other things I’ve read and I ended up enjoying it.
Thank you Books Forward for this digital arc!
At first, I had a hard time getting into it. Something just didn’t really click with me when it came to this one. But I did end up enjoying it overall. The second half of the book really picked up, and I enjoyed it.
There was a fair amount of world buildings, which I enjoyed and found interesting. There’s also a very heavy religious aspect to this story. The main character’s faith is a big part of her journey. I found that interesting and enjoyed seeing it play out. It had a unique magic system that I hadn’t seen much.
I thought it was all very unique compared to other things I’ve read and I ended up enjoying it.
Thank you Books Forward for this digital arc!
June 23, 2021
3.5 stars.
An epic fantasy story that features three characters that I loved, and who were really well developed. Each one had different struggles and motivations that were really interesting to read about, and the final scene was so fulfilling! The plot was fairly unique, and I particularly enjoyed reading the faster paced scenes over the slower ones. The descriptions of the world were excellent, and I really enjoyed the writing style of the whole book.
That being said, I felt like the relationships in developed far too quickly for my liking, and there were a few points in the book where the story seemed to progress too rapidly. It also took a while to get into the story, however, once it picked up a bit it definitely improved.
Overall, I would recommend this to people looking for an epic fantasy story with compelling main characters and for those who like interesting magic/power systems!
An epic fantasy story that features three characters that I loved, and who were really well developed. Each one had different struggles and motivations that were really interesting to read about, and the final scene was so fulfilling! The plot was fairly unique, and I particularly enjoyed reading the faster paced scenes over the slower ones. The descriptions of the world were excellent, and I really enjoyed the writing style of the whole book.
That being said, I felt like the relationships in developed far too quickly for my liking, and there were a few points in the book where the story seemed to progress too rapidly. It also took a while to get into the story, however, once it picked up a bit it definitely improved.
Overall, I would recommend this to people looking for an epic fantasy story with compelling main characters and for those who like interesting magic/power systems!
March 8, 2022
Not my type
June 21, 2021
DNF at 78%
I really wanted to love this one. It had glowing reviews, a stunning cover, and a synopsis that drew me in. Sadly, I had to give up on this one, it felt like a waste of time to continue.
I think my main problem with this has to be the writing. You could tell it was a debut, and that the editing was lax. From quotes that made no sense and were overly metaphorical, to the underdeveloped characters, to the overuse of certain phrases, I hated trying to read this.
I think my main problem with this was our female characters, Lucia and Luzanna. Over the course of 164 pages, they cried 20 different times. That's once every 8 pages. Yet, for some reason, Leo, our main male character never succumbed to his emotions. He was 'tough'. And sure, the latter half of the book attributes some of Lucia's strengths to being so emotional, but it really rubbed me the wrong way. Plus, both of the girls were constantly needing to be saved by Leo, which made the crying situation even worse.
As for the plot, it was almost nonexistent. The worldbuilding never made sense to me, and it took the first 260 pages for the characters to develop a goal. Before that, they were wandering around and fighting creatures of darkness. It didn't make sense, and their goal wasn't compelling at all.
Among all the other reviews so far, it looks like I'm the only one with this opinion, so take it with a grain of salt. I struggled to get into this from the very start, and it never picked up for me.
Thanks to Books Forward for providing a free copy in exchange for an honest review!
I really wanted to love this one. It had glowing reviews, a stunning cover, and a synopsis that drew me in. Sadly, I had to give up on this one, it felt like a waste of time to continue.
I think my main problem with this has to be the writing. You could tell it was a debut, and that the editing was lax. From quotes that made no sense and were overly metaphorical, to the underdeveloped characters, to the overuse of certain phrases, I hated trying to read this.
I think my main problem with this was our female characters, Lucia and Luzanna. Over the course of 164 pages, they cried 20 different times. That's once every 8 pages. Yet, for some reason, Leo, our main male character never succumbed to his emotions. He was 'tough'. And sure, the latter half of the book attributes some of Lucia's strengths to being so emotional, but it really rubbed me the wrong way. Plus, both of the girls were constantly needing to be saved by Leo, which made the crying situation even worse.
As for the plot, it was almost nonexistent. The worldbuilding never made sense to me, and it took the first 260 pages for the characters to develop a goal. Before that, they were wandering around and fighting creatures of darkness. It didn't make sense, and their goal wasn't compelling at all.
Among all the other reviews so far, it looks like I'm the only one with this opinion, so take it with a grain of salt. I struggled to get into this from the very start, and it never picked up for me.
Thanks to Books Forward for providing a free copy in exchange for an honest review!
March 12, 2021
This is seriously a totally different kind of fantasy book, though fans of good ole GRR Martin will definitely be able to immerse themselves in this new world Alvarez has created. Do I want to be Luzanna? Umm yes kind of. Actually more than kind of. So excited to see where the series goes!
June 22, 2021
Lucia Sanoon is having to grow up quickly as the High Maiden to the province of Moz. She and her mother have been abandoned by her father. Or have they? Lucia soon gets some unexpected information from Leo. He is from a rival kingdom and is the bearer of a very interesting message. The development of the characters and world take up a lot of the beginning of the book. I loved the descriptions of the fashion and style. These characters are great costumes for Comic-Con! Then we get the fascinating Luzanna who is an amazing warrior. She throws a kink in the complex relationship between Lucia and Leo. I loved how Leo, Lucia, and Luzanna all have names that start with an L. It helps to keep the imagery of the light versus darkness battle. The other thing I found this author did better than most fantasy authors was to make the fight scenes something I could follow. Having just read Priory of the Orange Tree in which the epic battle scenes almost required note taking, I really appreciated being able to visualize the epic battles. Since we know it is part of a series, I was wondering how the characters I had invested in getting to know would develop and grow. I was not disappointed. Leo, Lucia, and Luzanna all made each other stronger and added a layer of depth to their personalities. I can’t wait for the next book.
June 16, 2021
I was granted eARC access to Dutybound via NetGalley and then volunteered to review on the blog tour with Goddess Fish Promotions, so I was actually presented with two digital review copies. Thank you to all involved in affording me this opportunity! My thoughts are my own and my review is honest.
Dutybound both feels like classic high fantasy and something entirely new at the same time. I've heard others comparing the writing to George R. R. Martin and I must agree! That's what this feels most like to me. The descriptions, world-building, and general prose do feel very much like Martin's work, both A Song of Ice and Fire and his other works. In terms of the actual characters and plot, though, Dutybound is its own book! This is a story you've never read before.
Lucia, Leo, Luzanna (we've got a thing for the letter L, I see) and the rest of the cast are all very well developed, relatable and empathetic, and interesting. Luzanna ended up being my favourite, but they were all a pleasure to spend time with. Mark writes strong females exceptionally well (again, if one of the best parts about ASoIaF for you was Aria, you're going to love this!)
Be warned that this book has a very slow start. It asks you to sit and wait patiently as the characters and world are thoroughly introduced before the plot really gets going. It certainly isn't boring, the info dumps and character introductions are well done and entertaining, but if you like a book that throws you into the action on page one be aware that this one isn't going to do that. Hang in there! It's worth the wait.
This book is full of very philosophical themes, exploring light vs dark and the morality behind our choices. If you're only here for action scenes and a fantasy world you'll get that in spades, but I believe the true treasure at the heart of this book is all of the tough questions it asks and attempts to answer. It's fresh, it's captivating, and it's inspiring.
If you like epic fantasy, if you like Martin-esque high fantasy that feels like historical fiction with magic, or if you like a lot of captical-C-Concepts in your fantasy, this book needs to be at the top of your TBR!
Dutybound both feels like classic high fantasy and something entirely new at the same time. I've heard others comparing the writing to George R. R. Martin and I must agree! That's what this feels most like to me. The descriptions, world-building, and general prose do feel very much like Martin's work, both A Song of Ice and Fire and his other works. In terms of the actual characters and plot, though, Dutybound is its own book! This is a story you've never read before.
Lucia, Leo, Luzanna (we've got a thing for the letter L, I see) and the rest of the cast are all very well developed, relatable and empathetic, and interesting. Luzanna ended up being my favourite, but they were all a pleasure to spend time with. Mark writes strong females exceptionally well (again, if one of the best parts about ASoIaF for you was Aria, you're going to love this!)
Be warned that this book has a very slow start. It asks you to sit and wait patiently as the characters and world are thoroughly introduced before the plot really gets going. It certainly isn't boring, the info dumps and character introductions are well done and entertaining, but if you like a book that throws you into the action on page one be aware that this one isn't going to do that. Hang in there! It's worth the wait.
This book is full of very philosophical themes, exploring light vs dark and the morality behind our choices. If you're only here for action scenes and a fantasy world you'll get that in spades, but I believe the true treasure at the heart of this book is all of the tough questions it asks and attempts to answer. It's fresh, it's captivating, and it's inspiring.
If you like epic fantasy, if you like Martin-esque high fantasy that feels like historical fiction with magic, or if you like a lot of captical-C-Concepts in your fantasy, this book needs to be at the top of your TBR!
June 12, 2021
This book is very different. Lucia, Leo and Luzanna are well written characters. It's about the journey of the characters battling the dark. I would say that the writing is a bit difficult and very descriptive. It was hard to get into the world and get attached to the characters in the beginning since it takes time for the actual story to start. But it gets better after that. The plot and the action scenes are really good and I enjoyed it.
Overall it's a good read.
Overall it's a good read.
June 20, 2021
Unique fantasy world with unique characters. The book was different from other fantasy books I have read, in a good way. The plot was great and creative.
The length of the book was just right.
I really enjoyed the book and would recommend to others :)
The length of the book was just right.
I really enjoyed the book and would recommend to others :)
July 17, 2021
This book has a lot going for it. Aside from being one of the most original fantasy I’ve read in recent times, it’s got complex character arcs that deliver a heavy impact in such a short span of a few pages. Everyone talks about Luzanna, but what about Emma? She’s only in a third of the book but her story is sooooo tragic and her connection to Lucia was a twist I didn’t see coming, especially with what she becomes taking on the burdens of her brother. I noticed a lot of reviewers haven’t brought her up at all which is surprising. There is so much pain in this book. These characters don’t just lose the lives they’ve always known, but they lose themselves in the process. They’re forced to realize the world they knew was never what they thought it was and that destroys them.
Their journey does eventually leads to them coming to terms with their true identities and finding light within themselves, but I feel like this story brings up a lot of relevant questions of morality outside of the characters as well. It’s definitely a philosophical book. With generational curses, flawed upbringings, and betrayals coming from the people who you love the most, you can’t help but feel sorry for Lucia, Leo, Luzanna, and even Emma.
The xenophobia Lucia and Leo experience in the second half of the book is so resonant to present day politics. The themes of knowledge and how it’s manipulated to control what others think and believe, also relevant to present day. This book shows a heavy contrast between generations. The new generation is summoned by the light to destroy the darkness born of the former generation’s sin with their virtue.
Overall, this fantasy is unique in its approach to real life philosophical questions. It has a historical and realism quality to it and it’s characters are all so different. They are each driven by something different. Lucia wants to know her father and learn more about the gift he left behind. Leo wants to honor his father’s dying wish by protecting a girl he’s falling for. Luzanna wants to preserve the future her father tried to destroy and Emma wants to punish the world for the sins her brother commits.
To me, there wasn’t ever one singular goal just like there wasn’t a singular villain. This fantasy obviously wants you to see these characters in their own light with their own motivations for wanting to seek out the truth and destroy the darkness. The goal is to discover the knowledge needed to right the wrongs of the past, but each character has to go about doing so in different ways. And they do it in badass ways! I think it’s worth noting this book is HIGHLY visual. The action sequences are vivid and brutal. But also beautiful and inspiring. This is a book you can easily picture in your head.
Conclusively, I found this book to be fresh, unique, relatable, and layered, very much like GRRM as others have stated. I can definitely see that. The heavy foreshadowing and consistency of the narrative makes good use of keeping things connected throughout. I’m excited to see what comes next because there was a decent amount of build up in this book and many questions left unanswered by the end. What happened to Emma? Is she far gone and lost forever? What of the fourth virtue? It’s going to be a wild ride. I sure hope Book 2 comes real soon!
Their journey does eventually leads to them coming to terms with their true identities and finding light within themselves, but I feel like this story brings up a lot of relevant questions of morality outside of the characters as well. It’s definitely a philosophical book. With generational curses, flawed upbringings, and betrayals coming from the people who you love the most, you can’t help but feel sorry for Lucia, Leo, Luzanna, and even Emma.
The xenophobia Lucia and Leo experience in the second half of the book is so resonant to present day politics. The themes of knowledge and how it’s manipulated to control what others think and believe, also relevant to present day. This book shows a heavy contrast between generations. The new generation is summoned by the light to destroy the darkness born of the former generation’s sin with their virtue.
Overall, this fantasy is unique in its approach to real life philosophical questions. It has a historical and realism quality to it and it’s characters are all so different. They are each driven by something different. Lucia wants to know her father and learn more about the gift he left behind. Leo wants to honor his father’s dying wish by protecting a girl he’s falling for. Luzanna wants to preserve the future her father tried to destroy and Emma wants to punish the world for the sins her brother commits.
To me, there wasn’t ever one singular goal just like there wasn’t a singular villain. This fantasy obviously wants you to see these characters in their own light with their own motivations for wanting to seek out the truth and destroy the darkness. The goal is to discover the knowledge needed to right the wrongs of the past, but each character has to go about doing so in different ways. And they do it in badass ways! I think it’s worth noting this book is HIGHLY visual. The action sequences are vivid and brutal. But also beautiful and inspiring. This is a book you can easily picture in your head.
Conclusively, I found this book to be fresh, unique, relatable, and layered, very much like GRRM as others have stated. I can definitely see that. The heavy foreshadowing and consistency of the narrative makes good use of keeping things connected throughout. I’m excited to see what comes next because there was a decent amount of build up in this book and many questions left unanswered by the end. What happened to Emma? Is she far gone and lost forever? What of the fourth virtue? It’s going to be a wild ride. I sure hope Book 2 comes real soon!
July 24, 2021
I’m not really sure what to say about Dutybound, which is kind of the sentiment that I had throughout my time reading it, as well.
Overall, I’m not sure if it was written from a religious viewpoint (Catholicism, Christianity, etc), but it definitely seemed like that, and it really took me out of the story. For example, the characters were fighting against monsters that turned out to be some of the ‘seven deadly sins’—but not all of them.
Upon finishing the book, I’m still not sure what “The Light” is or does. It’s the main plot point, as well as the source of all power in the world, and they pray to it as if it’s a conscious deity, but they can also control it as if it’s simple magic. It seemed like slightly conflicting values.
By the end of the story, as well, The Light was helping the characters jump physical planes of existence and shape shift; however, this manifestation of new power didn’t happen until the last 10 or so pages, and felt like a slightly rushed way to tie up loose ends.
All in all, the magic system seemed under-developed.
The writing was not my style, and, in my opinion, in need of stricter editing. One character had blue eyes, and it was referenced on almost every page in the beginning and middle of the story. This character’s eyes also often changed colour depending on his mood, but this wasn’t referred to as any kind of magic or power. I found this to be a bit distracting.
I also don’t think that much of the dialogue or narration fit an epic-fantasy setting, either, as it seemed to be more present-day; for example, “shut up!” “You’re hot,” ‘The brave knight was really cool.’
I found the main character, Lucia, to be rather unlikable and somewhat weak, and I’m not sure what her powers were.
There was also rushed romantic feelings between characters, which I really dislike.
I will not be pursuing the rest of this series, though I commend new authors for getting their pieces out there, and I hope that Dutybound is the right fit for other readers!
Overall, I’m not sure if it was written from a religious viewpoint (Catholicism, Christianity, etc), but it definitely seemed like that, and it really took me out of the story. For example, the characters were fighting against monsters that turned out to be some of the ‘seven deadly sins’—but not all of them.
Upon finishing the book, I’m still not sure what “The Light” is or does. It’s the main plot point, as well as the source of all power in the world, and they pray to it as if it’s a conscious deity, but they can also control it as if it’s simple magic. It seemed like slightly conflicting values.
By the end of the story, as well, The Light was helping the characters jump physical planes of existence and shape shift; however, this manifestation of new power didn’t happen until the last 10 or so pages, and felt like a slightly rushed way to tie up loose ends.
All in all, the magic system seemed under-developed.
The writing was not my style, and, in my opinion, in need of stricter editing. One character had blue eyes, and it was referenced on almost every page in the beginning and middle of the story. This character’s eyes also often changed colour depending on his mood, but this wasn’t referred to as any kind of magic or power. I found this to be a bit distracting.
I also don’t think that much of the dialogue or narration fit an epic-fantasy setting, either, as it seemed to be more present-day; for example, “shut up!” “You’re hot,” ‘The brave knight was really cool.’
I found the main character, Lucia, to be rather unlikable and somewhat weak, and I’m not sure what her powers were.
There was also rushed romantic feelings between characters, which I really dislike.
I will not be pursuing the rest of this series, though I commend new authors for getting their pieces out there, and I hope that Dutybound is the right fit for other readers!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 21, 2022
Author Mark Aaron Alvarez brings the book that caters to lovers of fashion, period pieces, fantasy and magic, thriller and action, there is something for everyone in here!
With the underlying theme of light over darkness, family relationships, adulthood and responsibilities, morality and friendship, the book beams with captivating plots and characters that develop with the thick and thins of the plot.
Lucia Sannon, the protagonist has her life on the edge. With a long lost father and some recently attained knowledge of her forefathers, she has to be kind to her kind. She follows a gripping quest to fight all that hinders the survival of her clansmen. What intrigues me as a reader the most, is how Lucia’s war with the darkness and her search for fragmented, ancient knowledge is all driven by her sense of understanding of her own morality and identity.
Intricately written, the author has done a brilliant job in creating gallant yet lucid war scenes, descriptive imagery of the plot setting and a flawless narrative that polishes each character and contributes in its development. The depth of each personality of Lucia, Leo and Luzanna makes you instantly empathise with them. They represent the light in all of us, and it always springs hope in the reader’s mind, seeing that light win against all odds.
Although, the initial chapters focus a lot on just the character development and the narration of the plot and the setting, I suppose it’s the necessary buffer space to acclimatise to this fantasy world. It very much intrigues the anime liking audience, because of the beautiful war scenes, but is also very poetic in nature while dealing with delicate situations an inter-character relationships. This is again, a brilliant show of penmanship where the author knew exactly how to mould his voice and language to best suit the plot and deliver upon the right nerves.
With the underlying theme of light over darkness, family relationships, adulthood and responsibilities, morality and friendship, the book beams with captivating plots and characters that develop with the thick and thins of the plot.
Lucia Sannon, the protagonist has her life on the edge. With a long lost father and some recently attained knowledge of her forefathers, she has to be kind to her kind. She follows a gripping quest to fight all that hinders the survival of her clansmen. What intrigues me as a reader the most, is how Lucia’s war with the darkness and her search for fragmented, ancient knowledge is all driven by her sense of understanding of her own morality and identity.
Intricately written, the author has done a brilliant job in creating gallant yet lucid war scenes, descriptive imagery of the plot setting and a flawless narrative that polishes each character and contributes in its development. The depth of each personality of Lucia, Leo and Luzanna makes you instantly empathise with them. They represent the light in all of us, and it always springs hope in the reader’s mind, seeing that light win against all odds.
Although, the initial chapters focus a lot on just the character development and the narration of the plot and the setting, I suppose it’s the necessary buffer space to acclimatise to this fantasy world. It very much intrigues the anime liking audience, because of the beautiful war scenes, but is also very poetic in nature while dealing with delicate situations an inter-character relationships. This is again, a brilliant show of penmanship where the author knew exactly how to mould his voice and language to best suit the plot and deliver upon the right nerves.
November 14, 2021
Oh man, where to start. First off, I was super excited to support a Latino author in this genre. I love the idea of this book, but honestly, it’s so poorly written and it needed at least a few more passes in the editing room. This book could’ve been written in half the pages. It’s clear in the story that the author is a world builder and that he has a vivid and expansive imagination. This gets lost however because he gets a bit too verbose in his descriptions. He uses too many words and repeats things so many times that I found myself saying, “ok. I get it. Get on with the story.” Also, there are some basic grammatical issues like changing verb tenses, missing words and sentences just not making sense at times. I really wanted to enjoy this book but I found myself frustrated and not wanting to finish it. I definitely want to support more Latino authors writing in these genres and I feel like it’s important for these stories to be told but I also think we need to set the bar a bit higher. This story had some nice moments but the characters (especially the female ones) felt like they were underdeveloped and just whiny. My hope for the author, if this is part of a series, is that he hires an editor to really comb through and take out all the superfluous words and sentences so that this series can really shine. It would be a shame otherwise. I commend the author for finishing this and putting it out there. I understand it can be a difficult thing to do and I understand that my opinion is just an opinion. It may resonate with others who enjoy this genre as well.
November 24, 2022
4 Stars
I want to start by saying I really enjoy the creativity of this book. I feel like a lot of times fantasy/sci-fi books are very repetitive with the plot and this was so unique I absolutely loved it! The creativity that went into developing this plot shows because it is amazing, it’s interesting and captivating. My only issues were that the beginning was a little confusing for me but as it went on and explained things I found myself thinking back to the beginning and understanding it more. However, I felt like I had no connection to the characters and they were just kind of there. But overall this was a really great book and I still love the plot!
I want to start by saying I really enjoy the creativity of this book. I feel like a lot of times fantasy/sci-fi books are very repetitive with the plot and this was so unique I absolutely loved it! The creativity that went into developing this plot shows because it is amazing, it’s interesting and captivating. My only issues were that the beginning was a little confusing for me but as it went on and explained things I found myself thinking back to the beginning and understanding it more. However, I felt like I had no connection to the characters and they were just kind of there. But overall this was a really great book and I still love the plot!
July 24, 2021
Like this this wasn’t the story I thought it was going to be. I loved Luzanna’s character. Although I wish she would have shown up sooner, buuuut Leo and Lucia were so good too. I love how visual this book was. No part of it confused me and it was easy to picture. This world wasn’t like any I’ve ever read about. It totally had a different feel from other fantasy books. There was a fair amount of world building and it definitely felt like it was leading to something bigger. The foreshadowing was really good, not predictable but very potent. I like how it kept everything connected. This book was tasteful and thought provoking. Totally not what I expected.
September 26, 2021
Dutybound, is a great fantasy book. I enjoyed reading it since it had a great plot and well-developed characters. Luzanna, was my favorite character of all of them. I mean she could choke me and I would say thank you. Or marry me, either thing works. Lol. The book was well written but in the beginning, it was a bit slow and hard to comprehend. However, as you get farther in the book it becomes easier to understand as the plot grows. Just stick around to the end and you will be rewarded with Mark's extraordinary writing.
June 1, 2021
The plot does not start right away but keeps you interested.
I like that the book is not too long nor too short.
You get to know the characters really well and the way it was written just adds more charm.
I would note to all my non-native English speakers that this is not the simplest English as it has a lot of detailed descriptions that might give some people trouble.
I personally liked it but was not blown away.
Would recommend.
I like that the book is not too long nor too short.
You get to know the characters really well and the way it was written just adds more charm.
I would note to all my non-native English speakers that this is not the simplest English as it has a lot of detailed descriptions that might give some people trouble.
I personally liked it but was not blown away.
Would recommend.
July 24, 2021
Bro… my friend told me about this book. The promo art was cool and It has a lot of great action sequences. I liked the characters a lot. I liked how the characters weren’t all good or all bad. Leave it to my interpretation. It’s better that way.
July 13, 2021
I didn't expect to like it as much as I did, but the story, and amazing characters just made it all for me
May 27, 2021
Thrown into a new kind of fantasy, Dutybound takes you on a journey through light and dark philosophical themes. Alvarez introduces you to a group of very diverse and well-written characters. Lucia, the sheltered high maiden who is stronger than she seems. Leo, a hothead from a rival kingdom. And the dazzling, ever intelligent Luzanna from a warrior tribe far away. On the run from the dark forces that be, you watch the journey of the characters and their struggle with duty, fighting to right the wrongs from the previous generations before them. With gorgeous imagery and fight scenes that will leave you on the edge of your seat, it leaves the reader wanting more.
As a fantasy novel, the action scenes are thorough and well thought-out, but it takes the reader a bit longer to connect to the characters on an emotional level. The beginning of the novel focuses more on world building than creating that bond between the characters and the reader. When watched Lucia and Leo grow closer, it makes the reader wonder "will they, or won't they?" As the novel progresses, the reader gets a better taste of that connection, especially after Luzanna is introduced. Where will she play in that dynamic? As a reader, you are impatient to find out: Will the characters grow closer together or will they find themselves in strife after spending time apart?
No cliffhanger here, but once readers reach the end, they find that their story is not yet complete and in fact, much is still left unanswered. Will Lucia and the gang be able to defeat the sins of their fathers, or will the darkness overcome the light? Watch as the characters discover the strength in themselves and one another, finding that this is only just the beginning of something much greater than they ever imagined. There is so much more than meets the eye, have they bitten off more than they can chew, or will light prevail after all? We'll just have to wait and find out in the next installment of the Light Wings Epic!
As a fantasy novel, the action scenes are thorough and well thought-out, but it takes the reader a bit longer to connect to the characters on an emotional level. The beginning of the novel focuses more on world building than creating that bond between the characters and the reader. When watched Lucia and Leo grow closer, it makes the reader wonder "will they, or won't they?" As the novel progresses, the reader gets a better taste of that connection, especially after Luzanna is introduced. Where will she play in that dynamic? As a reader, you are impatient to find out: Will the characters grow closer together or will they find themselves in strife after spending time apart?
No cliffhanger here, but once readers reach the end, they find that their story is not yet complete and in fact, much is still left unanswered. Will Lucia and the gang be able to defeat the sins of their fathers, or will the darkness overcome the light? Watch as the characters discover the strength in themselves and one another, finding that this is only just the beginning of something much greater than they ever imagined. There is so much more than meets the eye, have they bitten off more than they can chew, or will light prevail after all? We'll just have to wait and find out in the next installment of the Light Wings Epic!
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June 17, 2021
A huge thank you to Books Forward Friends for sending me a copy of Dutybound to read and review!
Dutybound is a unique fantasy unlike anything I have ever read before. It has heavy religious undertones - our main characters Lucia, Leo and Luzanna set off on a quest to defeat the darkness. A manifestation of the sins of their ancestors as foretold in a prophecy. They must use the power of light with prayer and a strong faith to do so before their entire kingdom is destroyed and burned.
I had a really difficult time getting into this one. It is well written, but the religious aspect was just not my style. I prefer action scenes to be more traditional fighting instead of praying. I didn't really connect with the characters until about halfway through the book, and wasn't introduced to Luzanna, who was my favorite, until also halfway. The story does pick up significantly once you hit that half at mark.
This is a series that would be interesting for those that like reading about religions. It is definitely a very different fantasy read than anything I have seen before, just wasn't for me.
Dutybound is a unique fantasy unlike anything I have ever read before. It has heavy religious undertones - our main characters Lucia, Leo and Luzanna set off on a quest to defeat the darkness. A manifestation of the sins of their ancestors as foretold in a prophecy. They must use the power of light with prayer and a strong faith to do so before their entire kingdom is destroyed and burned.
I had a really difficult time getting into this one. It is well written, but the religious aspect was just not my style. I prefer action scenes to be more traditional fighting instead of praying. I didn't really connect with the characters until about halfway through the book, and wasn't introduced to Luzanna, who was my favorite, until also halfway. The story does pick up significantly once you hit that half at mark.
This is a series that would be interesting for those that like reading about religions. It is definitely a very different fantasy read than anything I have seen before, just wasn't for me.
April 10, 2022
Dutybound was an interesting read! The characters are all well developed and I really enjoyed them. Each one has their own ups and downs and a few of them were really interesting to read about. The world and magic system the author created was unique. There wasn't anything really wrong with the story. I had a Little bit of trouble getting into the beginning but once it got going it was pretty good. The narrator of the audiobook did a nice job bringing out the emotions and actions of the characters. When the next one comes out I would like to see what else I can learn about the magic system and see if there will be any new characters added to the mix!
Thank you Books Forward PR and Mark Aaron Alvarez II for sharing this audiobook with me!
Thank you Books Forward PR and Mark Aaron Alvarez II for sharing this audiobook with me!
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March 19, 2022Dutybound: 4.79/5 Stars! Have you ever had a book that you wanted to stop, but you couldn't put it down because you were too invested in the characters and what was happening to them? Well, this audiobook was that type of book for me. The story keeps the message of hope even when the times seem like a lost cause. The audiobook's focus is that through lots of hope, faith, and determination, a person and make it through anything. Never lose hope. When life makes you sad, have hope. This book will help people who need a motivator inside of a story. It will also help people show them that hope is real and can make all the difference. I enjoyed this audiobook it made me feel more hopeful, and even in difficulties, I believe that it will get better.
Veronica Pace, Ramon De Campo 4.89/5 Stars!
The author chose two gifted voices for this story, and I couldn't imagine anyone else reading to me. As someone who has had listened to many audiobooks, and performers, I can tell these are proficient and talented, and I hope to hear more from them!
Veronica Pace, Ramon De Campo 4.89/5 Stars!
The author chose two gifted voices for this story, and I couldn't imagine anyone else reading to me. As someone who has had listened to many audiobooks, and performers, I can tell these are proficient and talented, and I hope to hear more from them!
February 28, 2022
Thank you NetGalley for a free copy in exchange for an honest review. This was not good, maybe because I listened to it instead of reading a physical copy. I found the main characters to be confusing, all of their names were really similar. And the story itself was pretty confusing as well. And I found the religious elements to be annoying and heavy handed.
May 27, 2021
Thrown into a new kind of fantasy, Dutybound takes you on a journey through light and dark philosophical themes. Alvarez introduces you to a group of very diverse and well-written characters. Lucia, the sheltered high maiden who is stronger than she seems. Leo, a hothead from a rival kingdom. And the dazzling, ever intelligent Luzanna from a warrior tribe far away. On the run from the dark forces that be, you watch the journey of the characters and their struggle with duty, fighting to right the wrongs from the previous generations before them. With gorgeous imagery and fight scenes that will leave you on the edge of your seat, it leaves the reader wanting more.
As a fantasy novel, the action scenes are thorough and well thought-out, but it takes the reader a bit longer to connect to the characters on an emotional level. The beginning of the novel focuses more on world building than creating that bond between the characters and the reader. When watched Lucia and Leo grow closer, it makes the reader wonder "will they, or won't they?" As the novel progresses, the reader gets a better taste of that connection, especially after Luzanna is introduced. Where will she play in that dynamic? As a reader, you are impatient to find out: Will the characters grow closer together or will they find themselves in strife after spending time apart?
No cliffhanger here, but once readers reach the end, they find that their story is not yet complete and in fact, much is still left unanswered. Will Lucia and the gang be able to defeat the sins of their fathers, or will the darkness overcome the light? Watch as the characters discover the strength in themselves and one another, finding that this is only just the beginning of something much greater than they ever imagined. There is so much more than meets the eye, have they bitten off more than they can chew, or will light prevail after all? We'll find out in the next installment of the Light Wings Epic!
As a fantasy novel, the action scenes are thorough and well thought-out, but it takes the reader a bit longer to connect to the characters on an emotional level. The beginning of the novel focuses more on world building than creating that bond between the characters and the reader. When watched Lucia and Leo grow closer, it makes the reader wonder "will they, or won't they?" As the novel progresses, the reader gets a better taste of that connection, especially after Luzanna is introduced. Where will she play in that dynamic? As a reader, you are impatient to find out: Will the characters grow closer together or will they find themselves in strife after spending time apart?
No cliffhanger here, but once readers reach the end, they find that their story is not yet complete and in fact, much is still left unanswered. Will Lucia and the gang be able to defeat the sins of their fathers, or will the darkness overcome the light? Watch as the characters discover the strength in themselves and one another, finding that this is only just the beginning of something much greater than they ever imagined. There is so much more than meets the eye, have they bitten off more than they can chew, or will light prevail after all? We'll find out in the next installment of the Light Wings Epic!
May 12, 2021
DutyBound Light Wings Epic Volume 1 is well written and full of beautiful imagery. The chapters are short and well paced. The story is a new twist on the familiar battle between light and dark, good and evil, that will appease even the pickiest fantasy seekers (Fans of Tolkien and R.R. Martin are sure to enjoy). Lucia is a protagonist that you can root for from the very beginning. You will sympathize with her struggle and hope for her triumph. The ending will leave you feeling empowered to take on the struggles in your own life. “In life and in death, with love, darkness cannot destroy us.” Can’t wait to see what’s next!
February 12, 2022
(I listened to the audiobook) Thanks to NetGalley for providing this copy of Dutybound in exchange for an honest review.
I love fantasy and I really wanted to like this book, the world, the characters and the descriptions are on point, however there is something missing, I really cant put my finger on it but it just feels meh.
I had such a hard time with the first half of the book to just be engaged, I don't know if its the writing or the narrator or both but I kept drifting away.
The story is good, perhaps it was a bit too much of unnecessary descriptions making it way too long, this audiobook was more than 11hrs long, I feel it could have been at least half.
They change chapters but it feels like we are still in the same scene, then why change chapters?
The narrator has a very nice voice, tone and speed, I usually listen at 130 or 150 and voices sometimes get lost or a bit annoying, not hers.
I love fantasy and I really wanted to like this book, the world, the characters and the descriptions are on point, however there is something missing, I really cant put my finger on it but it just feels meh.
I had such a hard time with the first half of the book to just be engaged, I don't know if its the writing or the narrator or both but I kept drifting away.
The story is good, perhaps it was a bit too much of unnecessary descriptions making it way too long, this audiobook was more than 11hrs long, I feel it could have been at least half.
They change chapters but it feels like we are still in the same scene, then why change chapters?
The narrator has a very nice voice, tone and speed, I usually listen at 130 or 150 and voices sometimes get lost or a bit annoying, not hers.
July 16, 2021
Thank you to Books Forward for a copy of this book. I wasn’t a fan of Lucia mainly due to the fact that she spends a good portion of the book crying. Leo is also a bit bland, but the world-building was interesting. I would have liked to see the protagonists have a goal in the beginning half of the book rather than having to wait over 200 pages before they finally did. This was not the book for me and I nearly DNF’d it which is a shame because from the blurb it looked like it was going to be right up my alley. I also would have liked to see more build-up in the relationships. Unfortunately this wasn’t for me, but maybe it’s the right one for you.
August 17, 2021
Thanks to Books Forward Friends and the author for a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Unfortunately, this book was not for me and I stopped reading at about 50 percent.
For those who would like to check this book out--the story focuses heavily on the elements of light vs. dark, good vs. evil, with lots of references to faith. It could almost read like a Christian allegory, which just isn't my area of interest. I also had a hard time feeling connected to any of the three main characters.
For those who would like to check this book out--the story focuses heavily on the elements of light vs. dark, good vs. evil, with lots of references to faith. It could almost read like a Christian allegory, which just isn't my area of interest. I also had a hard time feeling connected to any of the three main characters.
July 20, 2022
I wanted to like this book but I unfortunately dnfed it. From what I did read, there is a lot of telling not showing like Lucia being a high maiden but never really going into what it entails. Lucia's mother is always saying something that could be used as quote to put on a t-shirt and Lucia is almost always being described in some way even though you know what she looks like and its not really relevant to the plot.
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