Okay let’s start at the beginning, this book was definitely put in a wrong category: I would rather call it Erotica with a mention of a plot, then a fantasy novel. The amount of boring, useless sex scenes is baffling.
Let me give you a few examples: ***spoiler alert***
Tallora hasn’t seen Dauriel in 6 months (which is repeated over and over. By the way, it’s stated that they knew eachother even shorter than that, yet they want to get married and refer to each other as the love of their lives.) Anyways, they haven’t seen each other in a while, so what is the first thing they do? Have sex.
They are having some kind of important matter to discuss with the *whole council* so what do they do? HAVE SEX. (Like literally, there are so many people there! Disgusting and inappropriate.)
Tallora turns into a mermaid again. (Big deal right?) So what’s the first thing they do? …..
(i’m so done)
And then when they finally go to my precious boy Kal, he had sex too? We get it, Kal needs to have sex with someone to move on from Tallora…. (Which isn’t even necessary. Give him some time to heal omg-) If he *has* to have someone, why Leah? They have 0 chemistry together.
***end of spoilers***
Apart from a few plot holes and the ending where Dauriel breaks the little character that she has even more, and apart from the boring plot, AND apart from the awful over-the-top writing style that is just a collection of “fancy” words, the world building is amazing! I really wish we could’ve seen more of that and less of….. you know the bad characters (and the boring sex, that just kept on going and going and going and-).
either way, this was really disappointing and i don’t think i’ll be reading the last book. perhaps if someone convinces me, or if the only plot point in the first 100 pages isn’t a sex scene, perhaps i’ll give it a try.