Issue 16 presents new stories from McSweeney's regulars like Roddy Doyle and Denis Johnson, and exploits a never-before-seen tripartite format to bring you a hilarious Ann Beattie novella and a special deck-of-cards story from Robert Coover, one of the great masters of American experimental fiction. This issue uses more cloth than any issue to date. Also, it comes with a comb.
Table of Contents The Quarterly
Brian Evenson – Mudder Tongue There came a certain point, in his speech, in his confrontation with others, in his smattering with the world, that Hecker realized something was wrong.
Denis Johnson – Lucky Last night at 3 a.m. President Kennedy had been killed.
Nathaniel Minton – Viva Mesopotamia Stanley Ellsworth, the anthropologist who floated deep into hostile jungles along South American rivers, developed gout in his foot, and a young doctor named Mettergit amputated and mummified it using ancient techniques he learned from an issue of National Geographic maazine.
Adam Levin – Considering the Bittersweet End of Susan Falls Susan Falls hates the flying dreams. She wakes up and she can’t walk, which is beside the point.
Miranda Mellis – The Doctor of Mental Health I am a fifty-year-old vegetarian man in decent health, though somewhat sedentary.
Kevin Moffett – The Medicine Man When I’m low, I go to Bel-Air Plaza to look for the medicine man, Broom.
Pia Z. Ehrhardt – Driveway Twinette is one of the moms on my son Eric’s baseball team. She took off to Colorado with another man and left her three boys in New Orleans with her husband.
Hannah Pittard – There Is No Real Name for Where We Live There was a hanging in the park last night. There was a hanging and now everyone is on edge.
Roddy Doyle – Home to Harlem He can’t find himself on the registration form.
The Novella
Ann Beattie with Harry Mathews - Mr. Nobody At All
I’m really happy to be here today, even though I’m broken-hearted.
The Story Told On Thirteen Interchangeable Playing Cards
Robert Coover - Heart Suit
All on one summer's day, the King of Hearts calls for the tarts baked for him by his Queen, only to find they have been stolen.
Dave Eggers is an American writer, editor, and publisher. He is best known for his 2000 memoir, A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius, which became a bestseller and was a finalist for the Pulitzer Prize for General Nonfiction. Eggers is also the founder of several notable literary and philanthropic ventures, including the literary journal Timothy McSweeney's Quarterly Concern, the literacy project 826 Valencia, and the human rights nonprofit Voice of Witness. Additionally, he founded ScholarMatch, a program that connects donors with students needing funds for college tuition. His writing has appeared in numerous prestigious publications, including The New Yorker, Esquire, and The New York Times Magazine.
McSweeney's loves to mess with the concept of "book" and they've done an exceptional job in this issue. It's sort of a box that unfolds to reveal: - A book of short stories. Nine stories,164 pages. - "Mr. Nobody At All", by Ann Beattie with Harry Matthews, a long short story or short novella in a separate paperback. - An oversized set of 15 cards, comprising the interactive short story "Heart Suite" by Robert Coover. It's the ace through king cards, plus a joker and one explanatory card. Each card has a few paragraphs of the story. You can shuffle the cards and read a different story each time. It is set in the world of "Alice in Wonderland". - A comb. (Yes, a comb, as in combing your hair).
Each is securely packaged, and it folds up into a shape like a hardback book, so it fits just fine on your bookshelf.
All the stories are fine, but I particularly like "Mr. Nobody At All." It is set at a memorial service, and you hear one person after another speak about the dearly departed. You get a picture of him, but mainly a picture of all the people around him. It's wonderful.
A wonderfully unique issue that folds out to reveal two bound books, a pack of oversized cards, and a comb. But more importantly, the stories are quality. The main book is the best, followed then by the standalone story. The cards story was decent, particularly as it references Lewis Carroll, but was maybe just a bit over the top.
McSweeney's 16 unfolds into 4 sections containing a paperback of short stories, a paperback novella, a pack of cards with a story printed on them, and a comb. Materially, this is one of the best produced and good looking books out there, McSweeney's proving their innovation extends beyond the written word into design. It's a shame the stories don't live up to the brilliant product.
Denis Johnson proves why he's the best known of all the contributors by providing an extract from his novel "Tree of Smoke" entitled "Lucky". The story follows young servicemen in Indo-China before Vietnam escalates into a full blown conflict and includes reactions to the assassination of JFK, prostitutes, squabbling brothers, and a monkey shooting all in 15 pages! Roddy Doyle, usually a very strong short story writer, provides a so so story called "Home to Harlem" while Adam Levin's "Considering the Bittersweet End of Susan Falls" has its moments as the story centres on a legless, abnormally intelligent teen girl in college falling in love with an older girl and then suddenly dying.
Robert Coover writes a story on the playing cards about the Queen of Hearts baking tarts for the King and then having them stolen. The idea is that, besides the first and last card, you shuffle the deck and each time read a different story. It's a great idea but isn't as amazing as it sounds. Each card ends with a character doing something and the event being covered on the next card. Eg. "The Knave of Hearts then..." and the next card beginning "... jumped through the window into the garden". It's ok and a neat idea but basically not that enthralling especially as Coover's story isn't very interesting.
Ann Beattie's novella was so insufferably smug I only managed 10 pages out of 50 before putting it down.
It's a great issue if only for the presentation but there are some interesting stories within. I think style trumps substance in this regard but the style is so good it's worth checking out just for that.
The packaging of this issue is probably the true star. It is comprised of a collection of short stories, a novella, a short story published on a shufflable deck of cards, and an inexplicable comb.
Contrary to what many are saying, I felt that the collection of stories was one of McSweeney's stronger issues. The lead story, "Mudder Tongue" was tragic story that didn't fold onto itself because of its strong use of humor. "Considering the bittersweet end of Susan Falls" took a while to get going, but really grabbed me after a point. It explored topics including the cognitive dissonance surrounding the shape of butts in pants. It just reminded me of my early college years and the weird way I tried to categorize the world intellectually using the bombardment of knowledge hurled at us at that time. "Driveway" was an incredible exploration of marriage or at least society's expectations of marriage. "Home to Harlem" had its moments, but I felt it didn't quite get the job done.
"Mr. Nobody at all" had an interesting form, told in a series of speeches at two memorial services. Though it had some interesting moments, occasional humor, I found it to be quite boring, over-long, and unfulfilling. It was well done, each character had a distinctive voice, I was just hoping for a story that equaled the genius of the premise. I saw that is was included in the "Best American Short stories". Given all the quality offerings in this issue alone, they could have picked a better choice.
The deck of cards story was fun and well written. I don't think I"ll be reading the whole thing again and again in different configuration though.
Heart Suit (Robert Coover) will be one of my favorite things for a long time. It changes with every reading! I'm in awe of his raunchy rewrite of the King of Hearts nursery rhyme that is both introspective and interactive. Yum.
Also of note is Roddy Doyle's "Home To Harlem," but I don't know how to describe that one.
i think this is one of the most surprising books i have ever held in my hands. firts of all is cover: fabric, folded 2 or even 3 times. there is comb and a bunch of books in different pockets. i have finished one with a lot of stories. good collection. wasn't disappointed at all!some stories are strange as always. liked one about Susan and was laughing a lot with mudder tongue:)
I recently wrote a short thing about Dave Eggers and then realized that I hadn't rated or reviewed the many issues of McSweeney's I've read. The early issues were especially influential and inspiring to me. This issue came with a comb!
This is worth a pickup for the content alone... but the fact that it comes with a comb and a deck of cards to shuffle and read as a story is FANTASTIC.